Circle Jerk

i escape your words
a journey, tangently
quadrant to quadrant

but gravitational pull
brings be to circumferenctly
centrifuge your story

the radius of emotions
pull me in

Author's Note

Haha! See what I did there? Edumacation of fizics/gomotree made poem thing.

Reviews

[Red Brick Keshner]

The mystery and power of our circles of influence. Reminds me of famous literary villains that everyone loves to hate or even their infamy, Stockholm syndrome, and toxic co-dependency. Much enjoyed as the notion of personal gravitation is quite superbly interesting.

[Davidgeo]

Clever. It took me a second because I'm a natural grammar Nazi. This is good writing I do thinks.

[...]

Yes you cannot resist , just getting in. Quiet truthful poem. What i see here is duality of personality. Don't get involved but there is something what catch up your mind. So you go and you don't know why. Very clever all is perfect here.

[Ana Papaya]

omg, how can i take this most excellent poem seriously with an author note like that!! :)
so good.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

it's like...well, we try not to get pulled in by a person, let our emotions escape---keep them in check...but feelings just happen...not much we can do to keep from being "encircled"---