Circle Jerk

Circle Jerk

A Chapter by Shy Joe

i escape your words
a journey tangently
quadrant to quadrant

but gravitational pull
brings be to circumferenctly
centrifuge your story

the radius of emotions
pull me in



© 2017 Shy Joe



Author's Note

Shy Joe
Haha! See what I did there? Edumacation of fizics/gomotree made poem thing.

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Yes you cannot resist , just getting in. Quiet truthful poem. What i see here is duality of personality. Don't get involved but there is something what catch up your mind. So you go and you don't know why. Very clever all is perfect here.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

omg, how can i take this most excellent poem seriously with an author note like that!! :)
so good.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

it's like...well, we try not to get pulled in by a person, let our emotions escape---keep them in check...but feelings just happen...not much we can do to keep from being "encircled"---

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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