NIGHT AND I

NIGHT AND I

A Poem by Red Rose
"

That moment of satisfaction when it's just you and the loud sky...

"
Under the centuries old tree I sat,
Gazing at the millions of iridescent stars above me,
Winking playfully, sending chills down my spine
Never ceasing to amaze me.

Hands behind my head, I breathed in deep
letting the scent of the dying embers tickle my nose.
Exhaling a week's stress,
I felt at peace.

A gentle breeze played with my long curly hair,
while the soft grass danced in the wind.
Enjoying their prominent company,
I smiled to myself.

Envisioning the next escape from reality to experience nature at its best,
I felt sparks of excitement course through my veins.
But right now I closed my eyes, living the moment,
Feeling my spirit hover and ride into the infinite darkness.
It's just me and the night sky...

© 2016 Red Rose



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Red Rose
I hope you liked it! :)

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beautiful lines!
a very elegant and intricate design...
"Envisioning the next escape from reality to experience nature at its best,
I felt sparks of excitement course through my veins.
But right now I closed my eyes, living the moment,
Feeling my spirit hover and ride into the infinite darkness.
It's just me and the night sky..."
excellent use of vocab Shaheera:)


Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Red Rose

1 Year Ago

Haha thanx Tazeen! ^-^ I find it a big deal gettin this review from you.
Tazeen Ahmed

1 Year Ago

Please do send read requests for your upcoming poems, it a please to read em :::)))
Red Rose

1 Year Ago

Insha allah I will. Thankyou very much!



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I did like it
It reminded me of sitting in the woods
closing my eyes and drifting off to sleep
all while listing to one of my dogs wondering
snuffling and chasing birds

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so serene! I love the imagery and the vivid sensations. Very well written! :)

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

oh gosh... whoever's in this poem is living my dream of solitude with the beauty of nature. i can definitely tell that you put your own wishes into this. keep writing this kind of beauty.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really enjoyed this every line was so beautiful you could definitely hear your voice come through this poetry it was honestly marvelous

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

beautiful lines!
a very elegant and intricate design...
"Envisioning the next escape from reality to experience nature at its best,
I felt sparks of excitement course through my veins.
But right now I closed my eyes, living the moment,
Feeling my spirit hover and ride into the infinite darkness.
It's just me and the night sky..."
excellent use of vocab Shaheera:)


Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Red Rose

1 Year Ago

Haha thanx Tazeen! ^-^ I find it a big deal gettin this review from you.
Tazeen Ahmed

1 Year Ago

Please do send read requests for your upcoming poems, it a please to read em :::)))
Red Rose

1 Year Ago

Insha allah I will. Thankyou very much!
There's something absolutely magical and peaceful about night sky and stars. This poem made me feel so calm. Beautiful

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Red Rose

1 Year Ago

Thank you! I'm glad you feel that way. ^-^
Loved the opening verse - It set the scene to well and your wording you used for the stars was so real. The whole poem gave a great sense of being alone and at one with all the elements around - peace and tranquilty, I think are the words to sum it up.
Really nicely worded and a great sense of calm.

Mark.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

matrixmark

1 Year Ago

I only wish that i could write poetry and as elegantly as you do. This lovely piece was so calming.<.. read more
Red Rose

1 Year Ago

And I wish I could write horror and thriller stories that are seriously awesome like you do! Your bo.. read more
matrixmark

1 Year Ago

Your comments are too kind and have made me smile.

Mark.
You never cease to amaze me! You are very original and very creative!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Red Rose

1 Year Ago

Hehe thank you! I'm smiling like crazy here! ^-^
This is full of emotion and has some good personifications. This is my favorite poem of yours.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Red Rose

1 Year Ago

Thanx a lot!
I know it's excellent writing when I feel as though I'm there, sitting under an old tree. This poem was a nice, calming and light read. Thank you for posting this Red Rose!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Red Rose

1 Year Ago

No, thank you! I appreciate it..

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Red Rose

Kandy, Central Province, Sri Lanka



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