HER UNIVERSE

HER UNIVERSE

A Poem by Red Rose

The sun turned cold,
And the moon burnt over.
The stars faded,
And black holes surged forward.
She reached up high,
And touched the black water.
It trickled down to her heart,
Her universe's fragmented disaster.

© 2017 Red Rose



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Red Rose
This one just came to me and I would like to know your interpretation of this poem.
Thank you.

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I also like this (w)rite RR. There is more than one direction your words could be heading, but I feel every possible direction originates from one core and source. 'Feeling little within one's solitary self' and it doesn't matter why or what transpired to get you there. Feelings such as this poem reminds me of, happen when our inner child-like persona curls up into a ball and simply wants to hide from life's bombardment. It's not negative or necessarily positive, and yes life's ceiling can be interrupted as 'black water' looming over one's mental and cognitive state. The human heart can be strong and it can be easily hurt and re-hurt, usually by our own hand reaching out to retest the murky depths before we have fully allowed our heart to heal. It is only a 'fragmented disaster' for as long as you choose to view your universe that way. Like I said, there is more than one direction possible here. Perhaps you were feeling little for just a day out of pure psyche exhaustion, or your working on overcoming something much deeper within your heart. (:

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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That was good wow how long you been writing

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

it's simple with a deep meaning i loved it

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This seems so simple and complex at the same time, great job! Thanks for entering in my contest!

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I also like this (w)rite RR. There is more than one direction your words could be heading, but I feel every possible direction originates from one core and source. 'Feeling little within one's solitary self' and it doesn't matter why or what transpired to get you there. Feelings such as this poem reminds me of, happen when our inner child-like persona curls up into a ball and simply wants to hide from life's bombardment. It's not negative or necessarily positive, and yes life's ceiling can be interrupted as 'black water' looming over one's mental and cognitive state. The human heart can be strong and it can be easily hurt and re-hurt, usually by our own hand reaching out to retest the murky depths before we have fully allowed our heart to heal. It is only a 'fragmented disaster' for as long as you choose to view your universe that way. Like I said, there is more than one direction possible here. Perhaps you were feeling little for just a day out of pure psyche exhaustion, or your working on overcoming something much deeper within your heart. (:

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is great! I love it. Your're very creative.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hurt turned to anger and THAT channeled to ...tomorrow

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Intense feelings to the core. The universe will always be hers and the sun will rise. Wait and hold up. :)

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really enjoyed ut, besides after a long time you came back with a wonderful poem..how would i miss it..
Brilliant

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really liked the flow and rhythm of this poem. Nicely written.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really love the imagery in this piece, it paints a very vivid picture of the tumultuous feelings that have been present in all of us from time to time.

Posted 8 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Kandy, Central Province, Sri Lanka



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