Wolf's Roar

Your children

I find so divine

and you-

you are always

so divine

with all of you

in my mind

I found my day

so Sublime.

 

Thank you dear

for sharing with me

the love you share

with them

and me.

 

I care for all

of you so much

and without

your endearing touch

I am left

a little unsatiated

but not bated

because there is always

hope that we will

come together

once more

and feel again

the Wolf's roar

of our Love too

as those little

children do.

 

 

Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

I like it. It's simple but it has original expression. A thing does not have to be complicated to be beautiful. Some of the most beautiful things are simple, like the truth for example. Jesus said it sets us free. But I'd take it a step further and say that truth is freedom. Imagine a world in which the was no deceit. I wonder if you can. That place exists inside my mind. This sounds like a family poem,. a family that is about to break apart and yet, still hoping for some reconciliation. I very much enjoyed reading. Thank you for sharing.

[Wicahpi]

Endearing. How nice to have someone to
adore and love who brings happiness.

[An owl on the moon]

There is such a mingling of magic and metaphor here... dancing and singing words! Your writing is filled with depth and tenderness...

[Michael X]

this is tender and touching sidartha, you've managed to bring into life such soft praises of an understanding that could only come from the heart,
beautifully done, a sense of peace envelopes the reader, always talented.

[deeps]

This is such a wonderful and most beuatiful write here.
A very enjoyable read this is.

[melissa]

nice work :)

[Drachke Thoth]

My cat barks, so I tootaaallly understand.

-Drachke

[Emily B]

the Roman twins have found their mother again . . . maybe :)

[Jibey]

Intriguing and powerful... the animal's cry speaks from the depths...

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

MY OH MY... I love wolves so the title drew me in, not what i expected, even better... love though complicated is made of simple beauty and so is this poem... another exquisite piece.