violet dawn

Brilliant colours, violet bright

shine to my delight

purple leaves, fying free

wonderfull to me

 

crowd the ground,

in a carpet soft

A most amazing sight

 

purple blue, on the move

canvassing the ground

Brilliant and bright,

A thankfull sight

Reviews

I love the way that this flowed so very nicely. I like how you used the color violet in it and I thought that the way you said everything was amazing. A very good poem. Great job.

[J. R.]

Excellent imagery and choice of language