Slow Reminder

The clock ticks by;

A slow reminder of time,

Each second elongated,

As the hands of time move forward. 

Author's Note

I found this poem, or rather, most of it somewhere in my computer today. It was written a few months ago, but I thought it was too short then. But today, I thought I liked it just the way it is, so I did a bit of editing, and here it is.

Reviews

[Sarah]

it is very nice also very sweet.

[Star Shyne]

A beautiful poem. Wonderful. Great job!

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

:-) thats sweet , we can't stop the time , it moving forward, without our control ... Yossi

[Tiffany]

I agree with fielder, this is really good and should be part of a more fully developed work.

Thanks for your honest review earlier. Its one of the first ones I have had.

Thanks for sharing, t.

[E. A. Fielder]

I like this but for this poem I think there should be more to it. Its a contemplative piece and I think you should put more to that.

[MarkGMelvin]

nice very cool seems like in haiku form
like it

[Fanciful Goddess]

very pretty,very elegant ,peaceful sounding poem.