I'll Admit It

I'll Admit It

A Poem by Alicia™
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I'll admit it; I miss you

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I’ll admit it;
I miss you.
The way you used to tell me
That I was gorgeous;
Gorgeous and yours.
Those days have passed,
Long taken away by the wind,
But I can’t help but to cherish
Each and every memory,
And sigh in delight that we made them.
I wish I could say,
That if you told me you’d forgotten
Each and every of those memories,
I’d lock them away
In my memory box,
To rest in peace.
I wish I could tell you this;
I wish I wouldn’t have to lie about it.

© 2010 Alicia™


Author's Note

Alicia™
This was written quite a couple of months ago… I did some heavy editing on it, but kept the structure and most of the 4th stanza.

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I particularly like the 4th stanza...can understand why you kept it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


I like the poem Alicia as I like most of your stuff. But the second last stanza in particular is confusing me, one because I think you could be missing a word and it doesn't make sense to me.
"Each and every of those memories,"
To me it seems like youre missing a word? To me it would flow better if it went "Each and every one of those memories,"

Posted 8 Years Ago


A really sincere poem written by you. I love it, I adore it. It's really amazing and fantastic poem by you. Nice job!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The memories are what linger, yet for a time they were true, to be loved to be held and cherished is something that cant be taken away from you, I know this feeling so well, for to me she will always be gorgeous, beautiful serene and quite simply amazing, even though in the end she chose another....well expressed poetic elegance

Posted 8 Years Ago


I don't know.
I'm not a big fan of the lack of rhythm in it.
Thats just me, though. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


The emotions o this poem is REALLY sincere, I love it really much, I really think its fine, amazing! Its really heartfelt and easy to be relate to, yes, I can relate to it really much! Amazing Write!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Very sincere poem that I think came out pretty good. The structure is fine and the emotion is very prevalent. Good write.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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