Galaxy

The brilliantly bright stars shine in the night,

In the galaxy where there are too many planets and stars to count;

Too many for a person to count in their lifetime.

Author's Note

Written for a competition… The theme "galaxy" came from http://oneword.com and I was supposed to write a poem in 60 seconds.

Reviews

[Plagued Monumentally]

This was really adorable.

[stars are far]

great one !

[Cherry Lai^_^♥~~]

A great piece of writing...

[lovepoet]

A great piece, given the limitations of circumstance!

Did you win?

I love Cosmic poetry.

Bravo!

[Audrey Howitt]

Good work. It would be hard to write with those limited parameters---

[Zack Burton]

I think you've done something excellent with your one word and a minute. This is very soft and, at the same time, to the point. Good work.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Fine, light and airy, balanced a little masculine for such a sultry tone, well done a good read to be honest.

[Dev]

Aww... This is so sweet! It can have multiple meanings for different people even though it's just 3 lines long! PS. 60 seconds? IMPRESSIVE!

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

Adore this poem.