Lots Of Hopes...

Lots Of Hopes...

A Poem by Sikandar Khan
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This Year Believe In Yourself And Achieve That What You Want.......

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Another New Year 
Lots Of Happiness
Lots Of Hopes
Lots Of Wishes
Peoples Are Celebrating 
They Want their lucks charm
MAy This Year Give Them 
What They Not Get In Previous Year
Have a Lots of Hopes to Gain
Some Wants lots of Money
Some Wants lots of love
Some wants lots of Happiness
Some Wants lots of time With Family
This New Year EveryOne Wish
Wish To Gain Aim 
Wish To Achieve What They Want
May God Gives Everyone Luck Their Charm
May Everyone Acheive HAppiness This New Year
May God Gives Everyone Health 
May God Your Parents Long Life
May God Your Dreams Clean Chit
Enjoy This Year
Try To Achieve 
What You Want
Strong Believe In Your Self And God
ANd Acheive What You Want.......
Happy New Year


© 2017 Sikandar Khan



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I wish I read this closer to the beginning of the year than now! Great poetry!

You may want to look at your subject verb agreement, like "some want" instead of "some wants" and "may God give".......

Just a comment on the topic of luck - I believe that in most world religions, luck does not really feature, because believers believe that their God is in control of their future, and they truly need no luck! :)

Of course, the topic of luck would be completely acceptable from a worldly or non-religious point of view....

Looking forward to read some of your other work.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Sikandar Khan

5 Months Ago

Thanks Sir For Appreciation.......
Sikandar Khan - Hope! Sometimes it's the last few drops left in a man or woman's tank after all else is gone that has been known to be just enough of a booster to provide human liftoff. Thanks for reminding us who may forget SK. Most enjoyed. Namyh

Posted 6 Months Ago


Sikandar Khan

6 Months Ago

Thanks For Your Review..
inspiring and wonderful,yet really simple.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Sikandar Khan

6 Months Ago

thanks............
Very hopeful and inspiring write indeed.
Very nice of you to write a poem like this and try to give others a bit of inspiration and hope.
I enjoyed the read quite allot very meaningful write :)

Posted 6 Months Ago


cimmy wuv xxxooo

6 Months Ago

about to go to bed. but I may get around to it, sometime.
your welcome :)
Sikandar Khan

6 Months Ago

ok If You Have % Minute Of Your Life For my writing so I Hope You will be Happy u spend 5 minute on.. read more
cimmy wuv xxxooo

6 Months Ago

ok I will try get around to it :)
Your poem is filled with hope... Good view :)

Posted 7 Months Ago


Sikandar Khan

7 Months Ago

Thanks.....
Great piece of hope. We all hope for the best and uphold our faith until the end.
And I,wish lots of hope too.

Posted 7 Months Ago


Sikandar Khan

7 Months Ago

Thanks Sir For Your Wishing.......
Thank You and hope the same with You..
Your flow was good Sikandar Khan.
Thank you for your wishes and sharing.

Posted 8 Months Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sikandar Khan

8 Months Ago

Welcome Bro...
positivity!
good one, yet another new year

Posted 8 Months Ago


Sikandar Khan

8 Months Ago

Yeah......
same to you...but i want one more thing this year
LOTS OF SATISFACTION...

Posted 8 Months Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sikandar Khan

8 Months Ago

Thanks For Your Review ....
saasha

8 Months Ago

welcome... :)
Beautiful repetition wonderful words!!!
Happy New Year!!!

Posted 8 Months Ago


Sikandar Khan

8 Months Ago

Thanks Dear.....

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Sikandar Khan
Sikandar Khan

Lahore, Islam, Pakistan



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