Madam...

Think Of Devil And Devil Is Here...

Madam Madam
Open The Door Madam
How are you Madam?
Madam Please Open The Door..
Heavy Rain Outside 
Please Open The Door
Lights Thundering Madam 
Please Open The Door
There is So Much Cold 
Please Open The Door

Thanks Madam
Oh Madam Why are you screaming ?
Why are you crying?
I am not bad guy 
Dont Cry My Face is Ugly But I am innocent
Dont Worry Madam
Why you crying?Help..Help..
Listen Dont cry
I am not Dracula
I am Just a Innocent Passenger 
Searching For My Dinner
Stop Crying Madam And Sit Down 

Goood Madam 
Thanks For Tea But I dont like Tea
Dont Worry Madam
Help Me Madam 
I am Hungry for 5 days
I am searching for my food 

No Thanks For Potato Chips Madam
I dont like vegetables
Madam Help Me 
Finally I got my food but need your help
No No I am not asking for Money
I just Need Your Help Madam
Please Close Windows 
Lot of cold coming from Open Windows

Thanks Madam
Madam I Am Not Dracula

Dont Be Afarid

I am just Innocent D.....

D.....
Come Sit Near Me 
Listen Me Carefully
Put Your Fingers On Your Lips
See Into My Blue Eyes 
Dont Afraid of My Dangerous Face
Because I am Innocent 

Ohh Madam
You Are So Beautiful
Your Black Eyes
Your Brown Hair
Your Sweet Lips 
Cute Face 
Slim Body

Oh Electricity Gone 
Dont Worry Madam I Have Flashlight
Madam Again See Into My Eyes 
Put Your Finger On Your Lips
Then Listen Me Carefully
I dont want any Noise

Soo I want Your Help
I am Hungry For 5 Days
I searched for My Food 
Finally I Got it
You Want to know
About My Food
Say Yes

Ohhh You So Exciting 
Okk Listen
Dont Move Your Eyes 
Put Your Finger Tightly On Your Lips
I dont want any Noise

You Are My Food Madam
Dont Move
Listen Me
My Speech Is Not Over
Listen Me
I have hammer 
If u make any noise 
I will hit your head with it
I have a knife 
Come Near Me
I want to see your attractive neck
Want To Kiss On Your Neck
Come Near Me Madam
Dont try to Make Noise
Ohhh Intelligent Girl

Oh Your Neck is So Sweet
You are also so Sweet Madam
But Sorry Madam
As I earlier Said 
I am hungry

Sorry Madam
Oh You Feeling Pain
Yeah You Are Feeling Pain
Knife Was Sharp
Ohh Blood 
Neck Full Of Blood
Sorry Madam

Dont Move Madam
I also Have a Hammer
Stop Moving
Goood 

You Intelligent
Oh Its Dinner Time 
Dont Disturb Me


Ohh That Was Delicious 
So Sweet
Taste Of Your Blood 
More Sweet Than Your Lips


Thanks For Dinner
Ohh You Sleeping 
May You Not Awake Again
Nice To Meet You Madam
Oh I forgot to Ask Your Name
Very Bad
By The Way

My Name is Devil

And I am Innocent

As You Know

Ohh Madam
Dont Cry 
Open Your Eyes
Its Just Your NightMare
Dont Worry Madam.......

Reviews

[CAPOLAVORO]

Love it! from top to bottom. It is full of suspense and is very tied up to the realistic world of greed, terror and misleading facts.

All in all, I believe this depicts not only a struggle of a nightmare but a struggle of peace in mind and body.

Well done.

[Sikandar Khan]

Thanks For Appreciation.....

[Beautiful Mistake]

To me this is the perfect mix between poem, spoken word, and play right. The first paragraph reminds me of that song baby it's cold outside. Outstanding job

[Sikandar Khan]

Thanks For Apppreciation....

[Lana Huskins]

Wow, this is quite intriguing and full of suspense!

[Sikandar Khan]

Yeah Thanks For Wow Madam...

[Olivia Clune]

The overt politeness made the spiral into the ending much steeper!! Great work!
Please check out my writing :)

[Sikandar Khan]

Thanks Olivia Madam...
I will check Domt Worry Madam...

[A. Wrin]

I don't want to pay attention to the English because poetry isn't always about grammatical correctness. This was raunchy. It was suspenseful. It was scary! It kept me on my toes and I couldn't stop reading until the end. Thank you for this :)

[Sikandar Khan]

Thanks
I am Happy You Enjoyed So Much

[Sarissari]

I really liked the detail at the start of the piece. There are a couple errors and I question the structure. But, I am going to assume that this is a poem. The poem contains lots of repetition, which worked perfectly. the repetition helps the man by making him seem innocent and mysteries. I also enjoyed the ending. The ending really tricked me. I thought he would fall in love with her, but she became his next meal.

[Sikandar Khan]

Thankss For Reading And Your Useful Review...

[Lyn Anderson]

An interesting form. To be honest, I don't find the way it reads entirely clear. The breaks can be better structured, and there are some minor grammar/spelling errors that need to be corrected. However, the story and the twist are nice.

[Sikandar Khan]

Thanks For Appreciating My Work

[The dark story]

Woah! This actually goes under one of your "better" works. I should admit that it has been a long time since I read any poem of dramatic monologue by the writer here. And this poem does it very well. Good job.
Also I really liked how it went. The ending left me in awe. I was literally like Kung-fu Panda's Po "WOAH!!"
Though I did muse over it too. Like I would be better satisfied of it being a Dracula than a Devil because the lady seems so generous, sweet indeed and hospitable. So I was like , why such a nice person!?
There are a few grammatical errors but this time it didn't matter much because what mattered the most was your story telling style. The iteration brings a certain tone in the poem, of the growing suspicion and horror. The setting is also well pictured. Rain, thunder, lightning and darkness- just an apt environment to create a murky aura around the reader.

But one question, why did you put it into the category of stage play? It's not a stage play but a dramatic monologue poem. I actually expected the stage play, was surprised I didn't find that but wasn't disappointed at all.
Well done. Keep writing and don't forget to practice your grammar to make it better.

[Sikandar Khan]

Thanks Atiba Madam For Your Useful Review I Am Happy You Liked My This Work And Thanks Agaon For Appreciating.....

[Sikandar Khan]

Ohhh I Also Was Comfuaed What Os This Poem or what?All Things Happen In One Scene With TWO character And Some Story So I Add this into Stage Play I am litle confused....

[Dust That Drifts Throug..]

I like this and how you put literal meaning into it.

[Sikandar Khan]

Thankss To Read And Like it i hope u enjoyed so much....

[wordman]

well my new found friend this screen write is as good as any i have ever read !

[Sikandar Khan]

Oh My Dear Sir Thanks To Enjoy My ScreenWrite And Your Appreciation....