Happy Birthday

For Peach

Ahm Ahm
How Are You?
I Hope You Are Doing Well
Was Waiting Eagerly
To Wish You
On Your 22th Birthday
Oh Sorry 21th According To NIC
Want To Wish You First
On This Happiest + Boring Occasion
May God Gives You More Happiness
I Saw You Are So Strong As Woman
May God Make You More Stronger
Hope You Recover Well
I know You Are So Ill
And You Are Admitted In Mental Hospital
For 2 Years
Doctors Also Gone Mad While Treating You
Now You Are Doctor And Your Doctors Are Your Patients
Sometimes How You Think Without Brain?Because You Are Girls
And Girls Dont Have Brain
Is There Special Power?
Or Its Power Of Mentallity
By The Way Happy Birthday
Your One Year of Life has Been  Reduced
Or I Want To Say Something Special
About Relationship
God Has Not Made You My Sister According To World System
But God Has Made You My Sweet And Elder Sister By Heart
And I Never Want To Part Away With You
You Are So Helping
This Birthday I Want Gift From You
I Want you To Treat Me As Real Brother
And I Have Hurt You In Past For Any Reason
Sorry For That But I Dont Want To Do It
It Just Happpened Accidnetly Due To My Mentallity And Anger
Again Sorry For Thiss
Hope You Give Me Gift I Demanded
Happy Birthday To You Sister
I Am Writing This
Not To Impress
Just To Express.....

Reviews

[barleygirl]

What makes your message interesting & unique is the way you include many real-life details that help us see & understand & feel the situation between you & your sister. I'm not sure how to interpret this line: "girls don't have brain" (seems offensive to me, to put women down, in my USA culture, but maybe things are thought of differently for your culture?) All in all, the reader can feel the caring affection you feel for your sister thru-out.

[Sikandar Khan]

Thanks For Appreciation Mam.......Girls Dont Have Brains I Use This Line Just To Tease My Sister.....

[¿]

This would make the sister burst into tears...you may not believe me cause she's not gonna cry in front of you but at her loneliness...(am someone's sister so!)
I like this total verse...and impression like real dialogues no making up...and just a quick write and expressed!!
Almighty's tremendous creation - Girls brain (my fave dialogue)....
And at the end you stunned me again with the simple and simplified lines...,loved reading it..☺

[Sikandar Khan]

Thanks Sister For Such Appreciation........
Your Review Totally Make Me Feel Proud What I Had Written For Her........

[¿]

Heartedly welcomed bro :) !

[Natasha Zoya]

I feel there is so much truth to this poem. Birthdays are a special day to celebrate but they are also painful because they remind us of our mortality so everyday is a celebration that we're still here

[Sikandar Khan]

Thanks For Your Appreciation.....

[Priyanshi]

Waah! Wishing someone on her birthday, but in so different way.I loved it.
Very well written, SK.

[Sikandar Khan]

Thanks For Apreciation........But Late......

[Priyanshi]

Hahaha...sorry.

[Lizzie]

Seems as a normal sister brother "fights" when it comes to teasing around. I also feel as if you love her yet hate that she is there. I hope that all goes well in her journey as well as yours.

[Sikandar Khan]

Thanks Mam.....

[TPK Stories]

I got the feeling that you loathe your sister, while at the same time, you express great love as well....good read...

[Sikandar Khan]

Thanks Mam For Appreciation.........

[Fanicia E.]

I like how it has a playful, yet sincere tone like how siblings act with each other. Pretty interesting poem if you ask me!

[Sikandar Khan]

Thanks For Aprreciation.....

[shruthi]

nice poem to sister...Even today its my birthday....feeling good to read it

[Sikandar Khan]

Oh Happy Birthday Dear

[shruthi]

Thank you sikandar

[Sikandar Khan]

Wellcome...Wheres The Birthday Party....

[shruthi]

Ya sure...

[Great Aunt Astri]

Oh, this made me smile! Siblings can be quite hard on each other. But I certainly hope she gave you the gift that you demanded! Good write, I enjoyed it.

[Sikandar Khan]

Thanks Mam And I Am Happy You Enjoyed This One.....

[Great Aunt Astri]

You are welcome

[wordman]

and a happy birthday from the word man

[Sikandar Khan]

Thanks Sir .....