Loneliness

Loneliness

A Poem by Silmara McGarry



         When I miss you, my day is like a smoke that doesn’t clear,
          The sun shines on my face but I feel nothing but fear,
       There is no light to be followed in the dark,
           You have warned me from the start, that you are nowhere to be found
         When the hurt breaks through your heart;
         My loneliness maybe a room with no exits,
          But my soul will follow you no matter what.



© 2016 Silmara McGarry



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A very short and a nice poem on loneliness filled with deep emotions and feelings that you have for someone. I love your thoughts and your metaphors that you have used to express the feelings. well written. Thanks for sharing. Keep writing.

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szhzia

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

8 Months Ago

Hey Szhzia :-)! Yes, I like short poems ;-)
Thank you so much for your kind review.
Al.. read more
SZHZIA

8 Months Ago

Silmara, It is my pleasure to read and review your works. I love short and thoughtful poems. And you.. read more



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the ending is so hurt breaking and beautiful i love this.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

5 Months Ago

I agree with you...even with all the hurts she still loves him...Thank you indeed.

Ha.. read more
A very short and a nice poem on loneliness filled with deep emotions and feelings that you have for someone. I love your thoughts and your metaphors that you have used to express the feelings. well written. Thanks for sharing. Keep writing.

Best
szhzia

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

8 Months Ago

Hey Szhzia :-)! Yes, I like short poems ;-)
Thank you so much for your kind review.
Al.. read more
SZHZIA

8 Months Ago

Silmara, It is my pleasure to read and review your works. I love short and thoughtful poems. And you.. read more
Very nice. A frequently relatable (Sp?) poem about being alone. Nice visuals and the black and white photo of London with Big Ben in the frame is a nice touch.

Good job, Sil! :)

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lovecraft

8 Months Ago

No problem. Hey, try reading my poem A Broken Heart, I'd like to know what you think of it and if yo.. read more
Silmara McGarry

8 Months Ago

I did even before you asked.. Truly love it!
Lovecraft

8 Months Ago

Thank you, Sil.
"My loneliness maybe a room with no exits". Fantastic line and great metaphor.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

11 Months Ago

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, Pete! I am happy indeed that you liked :-)
WOW AND DOUBLE WOW! What an awesome and irresistible write this is. You have touched me deeply my dear friend. ~Sharon

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

1 Year Ago

Thanks a million my darling for reading it and reviewing wonderfully.
See you dear friend ;-.. read more
"If you feel lonely.. Look towards the sky...
You will feel my presence.. You will know that I am near..
It's a cruel world...Time will fly by...
Yet, I will always wait for you.. forever..." :)

This one is a really good write. I loved the last line. Great job :)


Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

1 Year Ago

So Beautiful :-) !!!!
I am indeed glad you liked. Thanks a million! ;-)
Ah' what it is to be the first. Loneliness, is indeed a most unpleasant place, & one which you have more than adequately portrayed here. Let's all steer clear of it if at all possible eh..........N

Posted 1 Year Ago


Neville Pettitt

1 Year Ago

My pleasure, as always. Now lets try & get a few folk reading you......N
Silmara McGarry

1 Year Ago

Yesss!!! ;-) Thanks a million for the support.
Neville Pettitt

1 Year Ago

No problem.........

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Silmara McGarry
Silmara McGarry

May we find our souls floating in the peaceful waters of it's original place. SM, United Kingdom



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I often try to see the world with angels eyes... To leave people better then I found them, even if is just with a smile... I Love God above all... Simple love poems are my favourite... Most of wha.. more..

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