*YOU*

*YOU*

A Poem by Silmara McGarry


You are like diamonds of golden light,

Always shining so bright.

You are fresh breath of a new life,

In a world so tight.

You are sweet everlasting love

one can hope to find,

In days where love means no

more than blind selfishness of life,

You are the peaceful mountain

where my body lay down at peace

together with the happiness of my mind.

 








© 2017 Silmara McGarry



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Another lovely poem with great imagination of beloved for the lover. I love the metaphors that you have used in the poem and also the rhymes. Every line is touching to a reader's heart. a beautiful love poem in short and few words. I enjoy it. Thanks for sharing. Keep writing.

Best
szhzia

Posted 1 Year Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

1 Year Ago

Much appreciated truly! Thanks a million, Zia ;-)
Take care.
:-)
Sil
SZHZIA

1 Year Ago

It is my pleasure and you are welcome as always. ;-) zia



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Nice touch, simple and elegant,
You speak from a heart that is obviously in love.
its is becoming a lost art showing and speaking of love
music today does not talk about love, just lust.
movies don't show love, Just skin and acts of quick satisfaction.
Very nice poem.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

1 Month Ago

Ohhh...Thanks indeed for your time and wonderful review, Peter!
That is very refreshing poetry..with rhyming..really meaningful...very nice...

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

9 Months Ago

So nice of you to take the time to read, and such sweet review. Many thanks indeed :-)))))
horizon

9 Months Ago

My pleasure dear
To compare someone in such a way shows great love. Nice poem Sil.

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

9 Months Ago

Indeed ;-) Thank you so much!!!
A beautifully written puece here..lifting love up to a higher realm.

.nicely done

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

9 Months Ago

So kind of you for reading, Fran :-) Many thanks for the sweet review!
Oh! I so dearly love this! because it rises to that spiritual love that not all can feel it, beautiful images, the first one captured the eyes along the photo, Your style is that simple wonderful one that all can enjoy reading!

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

9 Months Ago

So kind of you to read and such sweet review. Many thanks indeed...What a beautiful name *Light*
Beautiful love poem. I enjoyed the entirety and strangely I took something more spiritual away in meaning.

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

9 Months Ago

Thank you so much! I can understand perfectly what you mean about the spiritual feeling...God :-)
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SKY
In days where love means no more than the selfishness of life; wish days like those should never end from anyone's life. Wonderful prose :)

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

10 Months Ago

Ohhhh... Thank you so very much!!!!!!! :-)
SKY

10 Months Ago

Welcome so very much friend :)
I love the way you capture emotion in your words. I feel so moved when I read your work, it's quite remarkable. Thank You.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

1 Year Ago

You are so kind, Anna! Many thanks for appreciating my work and for your wonderful review!
Anna Moore

1 Year Ago

You're welcome. If you might have the time to review some of my writing then please feel free to do .. read more
Silmara McGarry

1 Year Ago

I already did :-) And really enjoy it!!!
Another lovely poem with great imagination of beloved for the lover. I love the metaphors that you have used in the poem and also the rhymes. Every line is touching to a reader's heart. a beautiful love poem in short and few words. I enjoy it. Thanks for sharing. Keep writing.

Best
szhzia

Posted 1 Year Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

1 Year Ago

Much appreciated truly! Thanks a million, Zia ;-)
Take care.
:-)
Sil
SZHZIA

1 Year Ago

It is my pleasure and you are welcome as always. ;-) zia
Oh God, another brilliant poem. :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

1 Year Ago

So kind of you, Lyla :-) Many thanks indeed!

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Silmara McGarry
Silmara McGarry

May we find our souls floating in the peaceful waters of it's original place. SM, United Kingdom



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I often try to see the world with angels eyes... To leave people better then I found them, even if is just with a smile... I Love God above all... Simple love poems are my favourite... Most of wha.. more..

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