Into my Haven

Into my Haven

A Poem by Silmara McGarry

 

Let me take your heart away,
there is only so much one can take.

Let me set you free even though
you think you will never be.

Let me love you so and every day
I will let you know.

Let me swim with you in the perfect lake,
and hear the pleasant sounds it makes.

Let me guide you into my haven,
where the soul doesn’t ache.

Darkness is all you see and your
dreams are so far away;
But when you arrive there with me,
you will see all the reasons to stay!

© 2017 Silmara McGarry



Author's Note

Silmara McGarry
Haven not (heaven) is a place she created to take him with her.

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A nice poem on love with true emotions and feelings that the poet has for someone. Every line is heart-touching and love it.
"Let me love you so and every day I will let you know;
Let me swim with you in the perfect lake and hear the sweet sounds it makes;

In these lines the readers feel how the voice of poet comes from the heart with deep emotions.

Thanks for sharing.

BEst
szhzia

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SZHZIA

10 Months Ago

The reader can this inspiration of yours. It is my pleasure to read and review your works and you ar.. read more
Silmara McGarry

10 Months Ago

Thank you ;-)
SZHZIA

10 Months Ago

my pleasure and welcome. .. ;-)



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I love this! It's the perfect extended metaphor (great details!) for making love, yet it can also apply to many other good things in life that take time & devotion. I love the way you've written this in a very seductive way, but it's not heavy with physicality. It's like a mind tease. (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Week Ago


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Sky
Delightful and inspirational at the same time. The last line is very nice. "But when you arrive there with me you will see all the reasons to stay." Simply wonderful!

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

1 Week Ago

I thank you very much for reading and your sweet words! Only Imagine how would he feel to arrive in .. read more
Sky

1 Week Ago

I think i did already.....lol
The notion that Love will be good, happy and safe from all the bad in the world. That is my take away from this and it's a beautiful sentiment. It's partially true in my opinion.

Lovely poem, Sil! :)

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

1 Week Ago

My sincere apologies dear friend...How could I miss your review?! It is indeed true. Thank you so ve.. read more
Gentle, tender words. Filled with love and compassion. Lovely. Lydi**

Posted 10 Months Ago


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Silmara McGarry

1 Week Ago

Huge apologies dear Lydia...I don't know how I missed your lovely words. Many thanks indeed and a ki.. read more
This is the longing cry of the heart for a place of beauty and safety and peace. I felt the words calling and preparing a paradise.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

10 Months Ago

You got it all right! Thanks indeed for your well understood review ;-)
An owl on the moon

10 Months Ago

So wondrous to have your poetry shared here. :)
Silmara McGarry

10 Months Ago

My pleasure. Thank you!!! :-)
A nice poem on love with true emotions and feelings that the poet has for someone. Every line is heart-touching and love it.
"Let me love you so and every day I will let you know;
Let me swim with you in the perfect lake and hear the sweet sounds it makes;

In these lines the readers feel how the voice of poet comes from the heart with deep emotions.

Thanks for sharing.

BEst
szhzia

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SZHZIA

10 Months Ago

The reader can this inspiration of yours. It is my pleasure to read and review your works and you ar.. read more
Silmara McGarry

10 Months Ago

Thank you ;-)
SZHZIA

10 Months Ago

my pleasure and welcome. .. ;-)
Oh Your Writings Are Full Of RomanTic Poetry .....

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

10 Months Ago

Yes, you are right, most of my work is.
And it is my wish that romantic poetry could conquer .. read more
Sikandar Khan

10 Months Ago

Oh You HAve Great Wish MAy God COmplete Your Wish
A perfect description of what we all need and strive to find, a place safe from the chaos of the outside world, where only peace and calm reside. Beautiful words.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

1 Year Ago

Ohhh...so true! Thanks indeed Nemo, for taking the time to read and review.

See you... read more
Lorry.

1 Year Ago

You're welcome :)

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Silmara McGarry
Silmara McGarry

May we find our souls floating in the peaceful waters of it's original place. SM, United Kingdom



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I often try to see the world with angels eyes... To leave people better then I found them, even if is just with a smile... I Love God above all... Simple love poems are my favourite... Most of wha.. more..

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