Into my Haven

Into my Haven

A Poem by Silmara McGarry



Let me take your heart away, there is only so much one can take;
Let me set you free even though you think you will never be;
Let me love you so and every day I will let you know;
Let me swim with you in the perfect lake and hear the sweet sounds it makes;
Let me guide you into my haven, where the soul doesn’t ache;
Darkness is all you see and your dreams are so far away;
But when you arrive there with me you will see all the reasons to stay.

© 2016 Silmara McGarry



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A nice poem on love with true emotions and feelings that the poet has for someone. Every line is heart-touching and love it.
"Let me love you so and every day I will let you know;
Let me swim with you in the perfect lake and hear the sweet sounds it makes;

In these lines the readers feel how the voice of poet comes from the heart with deep emotions.

Thanks for sharing.

BEst
szhzia

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SZHZIA

8 Months Ago

The reader can this inspiration of yours. It is my pleasure to read and review your works and you ar.. read more
Silmara McGarry

8 Months Ago

Thank you ;-)
SZHZIA

8 Months Ago

my pleasure and welcome. .. ;-)



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The notion that Love will be good, happy and safe from all the bad in the world. That is my take away from this and it's a beautiful sentiment. It's partially true in my opinion.

Lovely poem, Sil! :)

Posted 8 Months Ago


Gentle, tender words. Filled with love and compassion. Lovely. Lydi**

Posted 8 Months Ago


This is the longing cry of the heart for a place of beauty and safety and peace. I felt the words calling and preparing a paradise.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

8 Months Ago

You got it all right! Thanks indeed for your well understood review ;-)
An owl on the moon

8 Months Ago

So wondrous to have your poetry shared here. :)
Silmara McGarry

8 Months Ago

My pleasure. Thank you!!! :-)
A nice poem on love with true emotions and feelings that the poet has for someone. Every line is heart-touching and love it.
"Let me love you so and every day I will let you know;
Let me swim with you in the perfect lake and hear the sweet sounds it makes;

In these lines the readers feel how the voice of poet comes from the heart with deep emotions.

Thanks for sharing.

BEst
szhzia

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SZHZIA

8 Months Ago

The reader can this inspiration of yours. It is my pleasure to read and review your works and you ar.. read more
Silmara McGarry

8 Months Ago

Thank you ;-)
SZHZIA

8 Months Ago

my pleasure and welcome. .. ;-)
Oh Your Writings Are Full Of RomanTic Poetry .....

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

8 Months Ago

Yes, you are right, most of my work is.
And it is my wish that romantic poetry could conquer .. read more
Sikandar Khan

8 Months Ago

Oh You HAve Great Wish MAy God COmplete Your Wish
A perfect description of what we all need and strive to find, a place safe from the chaos of the outside world, where only peace and calm reside. Beautiful words.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

1 Year Ago

Ohhh...so true! Thanks indeed Nemo, for taking the time to read and review.

See you... read more
Lorry.

1 Year Ago

You're welcome :)
Haven not (heaven) is a place she creates to take him with her.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Hopeful and beautiful for love and concern.
"Darkness is all you see and your dreams are so far away;
But when you arrive there with me you will see all the reasons to stay."
Sometimes we need someone to show us the light and joy of being alive. Thank you Simara for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

1 Year Ago

Many thanks indeed for reading it, and your lovely review! :-)
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.
OH BE STILL MY BEATING HEART! THIS IS BEAUTIFUL AND SO VERY ROMANTIC.I LOVE IT. ~SHARON

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

1 Year Ago

You have me smiling right at the first word :-) I love your reviews, and I am always happy when you .. read more
Miss Sharon

1 Year Ago

You are SO welcome my dear. It is always my pleasure. ~Sharon P.S. And God HAS blessed me beyond bel.. read more

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Silmara McGarry
Silmara McGarry

May we find our souls floating in the peaceful waters of it's original place. SM, United Kingdom



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I often try to see the world with angels eyes... To leave people better then I found them, even if is just with a smile... I Love God above all... Simple love poems are my favourite... Most of wha.. more..

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