Into my Haven

Into my Haven

A Poem by Silmara McGarry

 

Let me take your heart away,
there is only so much one can take.

Let me set you free even though
you think you will never be.

Let me love you so and every day
I will let you know.

Let me swim with you in the perfect lake,
and hear the pleasant sounds it makes.

Let me guide you into my haven,
where the soul doesn’t ache.

Darkness is all you see and your
dreams are so far away;
But when you arrive there with me,
you will see all the reasons to stay!

© 2018 Silmara McGarry


Author's Note

Silmara McGarry
Haven not (heaven) is a place she created to take him with her.

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We all need a safe haven. A special place of tranquility where we can totally relax and feel at ease. This is a beautiful love poem for someone who is surrounded by darkness. Let me she says. Yes, she wants to alleviate the negatives and entice him to a place where he feels spiritually lighter. Nice work Sil. Hope your day is going well.

Chris

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

2 Years Ago

You got it perfectly!!! All smiles :-)))) Thanks indeed flower for reading and your sweet review. My.. read more
Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

You are welcome :)



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Oh Your Writings Are Full Of RomanTic Poetry .....

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

7 Years Ago

Yes, you are right, most of my work is.
And it is my wish that romantic poetry could conquer .. read more
Sikandar Khan

7 Years Ago

Oh You HAve Great Wish MAy God COmplete Your Wish
A perfect description of what we all need and strive to find, a place safe from the chaos of the outside world, where only peace and calm reside. Beautiful words.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

7 Years Ago

Ohhh...so true! Thanks indeed Nemo, for taking the time to read and review.

See you... read more
Lorry

7 Years Ago

You're welcome :)
Hopeful and beautiful for love and concern.
"Darkness is all you see and your dreams are so far away;
But when you arrive there with me you will see all the reasons to stay."
Sometimes we need someone to show us the light and joy of being alive. Thank you Simara for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

7 Years Ago

Many thanks indeed for reading it, and your lovely review! :-)
Coyote Poetry

7 Years Ago

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.
OH BE STILL MY BEATING HEART! THIS IS BEAUTIFUL AND SO VERY ROMANTIC.I LOVE IT. ~SHARON

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

7 Years Ago

You have me smiling right at the first word :-) I love your reviews, and I am always happy when you .. read more
Miss Sharon

7 Years Ago

You are SO welcome my dear. It is always my pleasure. ~Sharon P.S. And God HAS blessed me beyond bel.. read more
We all need a haven dont we & that lake you describe sounds so compelling, I almost want to dive in...

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

7 Years Ago

I also think we do. I am glad your mind was into it. Thanks indeed!!!
some thing sudden touch with heart in life. I can feel so. I face once this situation. your poem so nice . I appreciate your feelings through your poem

Posted 7 Years Ago


Silmara McGarry

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
Priceless!!!

It has been written in a simple yet pleasing way that shows the gentle care the poet wants to give to her beloved... To give someone a place to live that is covered with love is more beautiful than any gift anyone can ever give... It's a peace building write with a beautiful touching message of love...

Sincerely
Dhiman

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

7 Years Ago

You got it again :-) Thanks indeed! I agree with you, that is for sure the most perfect gift! I am s.. read more
Hello Silmara McGarry,

I really enjoyed your poem. It was a beautiful topic and worded so well.

Thank you for sharing!

Kind regards,

Schatzi

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

7 Years Ago

Hello Schatzi!

So kind of you!Thank you so much, it means a lot to me!
Best Re.. read more

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Added on August 30, 2016
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I often try to see the world with angels eyes... To leave people better then I found them, even if is just with a smile... I Love God above all... Simple love poems are my favourite... Most of wha.. more..

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