Splendid

Splendid

A Poem by Silmara McGarry


 

And it belongs to you, the love that beats in my heart.
My soul that seeks yours, and find it every time,

for they are now one.

I am the air that you breathe, the star that guide you.
Effective fire that burns with passion.


The white eagle that flies above the sea, with the
desire to be with you.


I am your angel, your safe harboor, your peace

and contentment.


It is in each other’s hug, love and trust, that we

are elevated to paradise.

And paradise, is no less then we deserve!

 


© 2017 Silmara McGarry



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What beautiful longings, what sacred revelations to your lover. You become all that is desired and needed to live a life of fullness, of loving, of truly splendid peace. This is what can fulfill a longing soul, to have someone to share their world with in every way.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

1 Month Ago

Thanks indeed for taking the time to read and your wonderful review :-)))



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I would guess that some read this as professing earthly-type love, but I'm just too jaded to read your poem that way. To me, this feels like a more heavenly version of love, as if describing God's love or the love of some departed angel. When reading it like this, I love the way you express this heavenly love. But if I read it the other way, I'm afraid I'm just too skeptical! Thanks for understanding my limitations (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

1 Month Ago

You are so good...Yes! Heavenly version of love :) Thanks indeed dear flower🌻 Margie :-))) HUGSS.. read more
What beautiful longings, what sacred revelations to your lover. You become all that is desired and needed to live a life of fullness, of loving, of truly splendid peace. This is what can fulfill a longing soul, to have someone to share their world with in every way.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

1 Month Ago

Thanks indeed for taking the time to read and your wonderful review :-)))
This would be a great message for Your love, it's filled with trust and passions, energy of joy and bliss, I love this my friend.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

10 Months Ago

Ohhh....thanks for reading! I am indeed happy you like it dear friend ;-) Enjoy your weekend!
Light

10 Months Ago

Enjoy Yours too :)
Wow, Silmara, this just brought a tear to my eye. How wonderful are your words. In particular, 'the white eagle that flies above the sea with the desire to be with you;'
I'm so touched by this imagery.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

1 Year Ago

Ohhh...I am indeed glad that it touched your heart.
Thank you so very much, Anna.

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Paradise Of Love.........................

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

1 Year Ago

Indeed!!!
Thank you,
:-)
Sil
Sikandar Khan

1 Year Ago

Wellcome Dear...

SK
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SKY
Yes it is, paradise is never lost for a true loving heart. Beautiful poem.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

2 Years Ago

I agree with you! Thanks indeed ;-)
SKY

2 Years Ago

Your most welcome :)
A perfect way to describe the emotion of love.
"I am your angel...your safe harbour...your peace and contentment"
Love is kindness, concern and safe place to be yourself. Thank you Silmara for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


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Silmara McGarry

2 Years Ago

I agree with you, yes, love is a safe place to be yourself.
No, I am the one to thank you fo.. read more
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

I have enjoyed your work and you are welcome.
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Gee
Ahh, sweet. Beautifully written and would be received with the biggest smile by any lover.

Posted 2 Years Ago


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Silmara McGarry

2 Years Ago

Ohhh...So kind and beautiful words Gee. I hope all lovers smile then ;-) Thank you indeed!
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Ah!!! How sweet this is... It kind of declares the passionate love the two lovers have for each other... Such a romantic way to write this one... You made your feelings visible to our soul's mind by presenting the poem with various beautiful natural elements... It is a joy to read when something has been written in this way... What a lovely write frnd...

Sincerely
Dhiman

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

2 Years Ago

Thank you very much! Yesss...you got it!!! That is what I wanted to express not just her feelings fo.. read more

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Silmara McGarry
Silmara McGarry

May we find our souls floating in the peaceful waters of it's original place. SM, United Kingdom



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I often try to see the world with angels eyes... To leave people better then I found them, even if is just with a smile... I Love God above all... Simple love poems are my favourite... Most of wha.. more..

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