Violet Field

 

As I walk down the road with you, I take the air and breathe it in, my heart that beats perfectly when you are near me.

Am I the one to lift you up to the vast field of purple violets, where our silent minds dance together in the privacy of the magical nights?

Give me the honour of looking into your eyes and entering your heart, where the way leads to your soul that had been connected with mine, since the beginning of our lives.

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

ooooooo .. she asks a lot me thinks! ... that kind of trust and being vulnerable are especially difficult for most men in particular .. women too .. but not so much .. i love the pic .. and the purple of your prose .. it makes a strong connection for me
E.

[Silmara McGarry]

True!
Much appreciated dear🙏🏻

[Leigh]

I like this, you have captured a feeling and converted a mood into a colour

[Silmara McGarry]

Many thanks indeed for reading and your kind review.

All best...Sil :-)

[Miss Sharon]

Oh be still my beating heart! This is so beautiful and romantic. I love all of it and purple being my fave, I love it even more! ~Shron

[Silmara McGarry]

I love your reviews, Miss Sharon! You always give me the biggest smile :-)
Thanks a million for reading, and I am so happy I got the right color to enchant you...lol... ;-)

All the very BEST darling.

See you...Sil

[Miss Sharon]

I love to see you smile my dear friend! May your days be billed with much about which to smile. ~Sharon

[Silmara McGarry]

Thank you so very much!!! And yours also :-) :-) :-)

[B.J]

Such a pleasant messagw for a greating card. The last stanza is heartfelt tenderness

[Silmara McGarry]

Thanks indeed for reading and you lovely review :-)

All the very best,

Sil :-)

[B.J]

:)>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

[Karmee]

So hopeful, I enjoyed this write.
You write very nicely

[Silmara McGarry]

Many thanks indeed, dear for your lovely review ;-)

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Breathtaking read! You conveyed a strong sense of beauty and feeling that made me know how you felt. "The beginning of our lives," there's something about this expression that I adore! Tyfs!

[Silmara McGarry]

You just but a big smile on my face :-) with your review...THANK YOU!!! I am glad you adored the expression. I love this poem myself, it came out of a dream I had.
God bless you.
Sil

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

From a dream? That's amazing, it must have been beautiful. You're most welcome for the review, it's my pleasure!

[Silmara McGarry]

Yes, Beautiful indeed. Thanks again :-)

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

You're very welcome.

[Relic]

This is wonderfully done. I love the way the font almost highlights the picture. You write with a lot of emotion. Your devotional tone is also clear and pleasing.

Nice one Sil.

You might want to add a question mark at the end of the fourth sentence.

Relic :)

[Silmara McGarry]

You know, this poem came out of a dream I had.
Ohhhh... Thanks indeed for your kind wonderful words, review... and (?) thanks in a whispering :-)

[Coyote Poetry]

Soft and hopeful thoughts for love.
"Give me the honour of looking into your eyes and entering your heart, where the way leads to your soul that had been connected with mine since the beginning of our lives."
I liked the above lines. When we welcome love. Love can come. Thank you Silmara for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Silmara McGarry]

I am indeed glad you enjoy it :-) Thank you so much for reading it and your kind lovely words. See you ;-)

[Coyote Poetry]

I did enjoy and you are welcome Silmara.

[Lorry]

Beautiful words, thoughts and sentiment, cascading off the page, into our minds. Superb.

[Silmara McGarry]

I really like the way you set your words in your reviews, very thoughtful :-) Thank you indeed.

[Lorry]

You're welcome :)

[Inject Positivity]

Very adorable, I love your poems simplicity, they are always written in a simple way but makes the reader feel the feelings of love roaming in the words of the poem... The last line, so amazing and innocent... Loved it frnd...

Sincerely
Dhiman

[Silmara McGarry]

Yes, I really like simple not to long poems, but the feelings will always be there pouring...lol...Thank you soooo much for your kind words. Regards. Sil

[Lord of mad men]

very nice. i loved it. it is great. i like how you changed everything to violet. some writers just leave everything the same i do that bc i just do. but it is nice.

[Silmara McGarry]

Many thanks indeed! That is what I said: why not everything violet...it is after all violet field..lol...I really appreciated :-)