Violet Field

Violet Field

A Poem by Silmara McGarry

 


As I walk down the road with you, I take the air and breathe it in, my heart that beats perfectly when you are near me.


Am I the one to lift you up to the vast field of purple violets, where our silent minds dance together in the privacy of the magical nights?

Give me the honour of looking into your eyes and entering your heart, where the way leads to your soul that had been connected with mine, since the beginning of our lives.


© 2018 Silmara McGarry



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Soft and hopeful thoughts for love.
"Give me the honour of looking into your eyes and entering your heart, where the way leads to your soul that had been connected with mine since the beginning of our lives."
I liked the above lines. When we welcome love. Love can come. Thank you Silmara for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

2 Years Ago

I am indeed glad you enjoy it :-) Thank you so much for reading it and your kind lovely words. See y.. read more
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

I did enjoy and you are welcome Silmara.



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So hopeful, I enjoyed this write.
You write very nicely

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

2 Years Ago

Many thanks indeed, dear for your lovely review ;-)
Breathtaking read! You conveyed a strong sense of beauty and feeling that made me know how you felt. "The beginning of our lives," there's something about this expression that I adore! Tyfs!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cyprian Van Dyke

2 Years Ago

From a dream? That's amazing, it must have been beautiful. You're most welcome for the review, it's .. read more
Silmara McGarry

2 Years Ago

Yes, Beautiful indeed. Thanks again :-)
Cyprian Van Dyke

2 Years Ago

You're very welcome.
This is wonderfully done. I love the way the font almost highlights the picture. You write with a lot of emotion. Your devotional tone is also clear and pleasing.

Nice one Sil.

You might want to add a question mark at the end of the fourth sentence.

Relic :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

2 Years Ago

You know, this poem came out of a dream I had.
Ohhhh... Thanks indeed for your kind wonderfu.. read more
Soft and hopeful thoughts for love.
"Give me the honour of looking into your eyes and entering your heart, where the way leads to your soul that had been connected with mine since the beginning of our lives."
I liked the above lines. When we welcome love. Love can come. Thank you Silmara for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

2 Years Ago

I am indeed glad you enjoy it :-) Thank you so much for reading it and your kind lovely words. See y.. read more
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

I did enjoy and you are welcome Silmara.
Beautiful words, thoughts and sentiment, cascading off the page, into our minds. Superb.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

2 Years Ago

I really like the way you set your words in your reviews, very thoughtful :-) Thank you indeed.
Lorry

2 Years Ago

You're welcome :)
Very adorable, I love your poems simplicity, they are always written in a simple way but makes the reader feel the feelings of love roaming in the words of the poem... The last line, so amazing and innocent... Loved it frnd...

Sincerely
Dhiman

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

2 Years Ago

Yes, I really like simple not to long poems, but the feelings will always be there pouring...lol...T.. read more
very nice. i loved it. it is great. i like how you changed everything to violet. some writers just leave everything the same i do that bc i just do. but it is nice.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

2 Years Ago

Many thanks indeed! That is what I said: why not everything violet...it is after all violet field..l.. read more
Lovely read. And beautiful write. Really enjoyed it. Keep it up..:-)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

2 Years Ago

Thanks a million Jackie :-) I am happy you enjoy it! I will...I will ;-)

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Added on August 30, 2016
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Silmara McGarry
Silmara McGarry

May we find our souls floating in the peaceful waters of it's original place. SM, United Kingdom



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I often try to see the world with angels eyes... To leave people better then I found them, even if is just with a smile... I Love God above all... Simple love poems are my favourite... Most of wha.. more..

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