Surreal Love

Surreal Love

A Poem by Silmara McGarry


Between the gracefulness of butterflies, 
and the enchanting sweet colours of 
a warm spring morning, delivered in the 
most surreal dance, lays my Love for you.

Between the storms in the sky and the blue 
lights that surround the angels in heaven, 
mesmerized by the look in your eyes, 
hypnotized by my Love for you.

Between each wave in the ocean, gripped by 
the motion of fresh winds and one thousand 
innocent pearls, in the hands of the singing 
mermaid, breathing calmly, sails my Love for you.

Between the fascinating birds in the forbidden
forest, sweeping around ancient trees, 
sheltering the intense heat that flows quietly 
across its glittering waters, hides my Love for you. 

Between the moon and earth, and stages of 
glowing stars, twinkling up the dark night 
with promises of light, and the great creations 
of God, reflects my Love for you.

© 2018 Silmara McGarry


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'Between the fascinating birds in the forbidden
forest, sweeping around ancient trees,
sheltering the intense heat that flows quietly
across its glittering waters, hides my Love for you.'

Each and every one of your stanzas has a different mood and meaning - but still has to include that precious word. Is ther anything better than Love, Silmara. You create and share unique poetic beauty

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

7 Months Ago

No there isn't, Love is healing and cure!
Truly appreciated dearest Emma your kind words💐
emmajoygreen

7 Months Ago

You are very welcome, dear Silmara



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Beautiful poem! I love the way you use the word Between before each stanza, and my love for you at the end of each stanza. Loving and joyous is how I would describe your poem.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

1 Month Ago

I am truly glad you enjoyed it!
Thank you so much for reaching out and your lovely review �.. read more
Masterful write, beautiful read.

With love,

Matthew

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

4 Months Ago

Much appreciated dear for reading and your superb review! Thank you so much Matthew!
Have a s.. read more
'Between the fascinating birds in the forbidden
forest, sweeping around ancient trees,
sheltering the intense heat that flows quietly
across its glittering waters, hides my Love for you.'

Each and every one of your stanzas has a different mood and meaning - but still has to include that precious word. Is ther anything better than Love, Silmara. You create and share unique poetic beauty

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

7 Months Ago

No there isn't, Love is healing and cure!
Truly appreciated dearest Emma your kind words💐
emmajoygreen

7 Months Ago

You are very welcome, dear Silmara
A lovely sweeping song of love. Beautiful rhythm that fits the subject so exactly.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

11 Months Ago

Hello dear Ken!
Many thanks indeed for your wonderful review🌹
I loved the beautiful imagery of nature and the words of love, so much. Thank you for sharing

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

11 Months Ago

Hello dear 😊
Thank you so much for your visit and lovely review 🤍
DIVYA

10 Months Ago

You're most welcome! :)
Really love this and the really excellent setting of the Piece. Great Work ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️100/100

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

11 Months Ago

Truly appreciated dear😊Thanks indeed for your visit 🌹
Wishing you a very pleasant weeke.. read more
Is this written as a lovely romantic song? I'm seeing that in this. Lovely words....wonderful thoughts.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

2 Years Ago

Hey! I have not written as a song, but it sure could be one ))) Many thanks indeed Frankie, much app.. read more
Hello Sil, lovely lady.

Your posted image is so uplifting and your stanzas are romantic and packed with beautiful imagery. The final line in each stanza is particularly effective. Very much enjoyed the natural environment woven into the lines of your romantic offering.

Have a great weekend Sil.

Chris



Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

2 Years Ago

Hey darling Chris :-)
Many thanks indeed my dear for your beautiful words and understanding o.. read more
OMG what a magnificent masterpiece my friend!!! I am so happy I stumbled into this, each verse stands alone itself, a breathtaking, a heart stolen piece, something I wish I had written, glorious and heavenly written, I highly applaud You my friend. well done ✨

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

3 Years Ago

OHHHHH....I am ever SO happy you enjoyed my poem, truly !!! What a delight to read your special revi.. read more
lightsong

3 Years Ago

You are warmly welcome my friend :) You deserve it all, I am happy I made You smile~ Bless You enorm.. read more
This is one of my favorite poems I've read on here. Just the absolute top of the list. It's so beautiful and flows so wonderfully. It captures love, compares it to weather, colors, animals, everything beautiful and it's just an amazing poem. Sorry if I keep repeating myself, I just really adore this one and am amazed by it!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

3 Years Ago

Hey :-)
I am so glad you enjoyed my poem, and the ever so kind and wonderful words on it, ple.. read more

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Added on September 2, 2016
Last Updated on August 24, 2018

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I often try to see the world with angels eyes... To leave people better then I found them, even if is just with a smile... I Love God above all... Simple love poems are my favourite... Most of wha.. more..

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