Between the gracefulness of butterflies,
and the enchanting sweet colours of
a warm spring morning, delivered in the
most surreal dance, lays my Love for you.
Between the storms in the sky and the blue
lights that surround the angels in heaven,
mesmerized by the look in your eyes,
hypnotized by my Love for you.
Between each wave in the ocean, gripped by
the motion of fresh winds and one thousand
innocent pearls, in the hands of the singing
mermaid, breathing calmly, sails my Love for you.
Between the fascinating birds in the forbidden
forest, sweeping around ancient trees,
sheltering the intense heat that flows quietly
across its glittering waters, hides my Love for you.
Between the moon and earth, and stages of
glowing stars, twinkling up the dark night
with promises of light, and the great creations
of God, reflects my Love for you.
'Between the fascinating birds in the forbidden
forest, sweeping around ancient trees,
sheltering the intense heat that flows quietly
across its glittering waters, hides my Love for you.'
Each and every one of your stanzas has a different mood and meaning - but still has to include that precious word. Is ther anything better than Love, Silmara. You create and share unique poetic beauty
Posted 7 Months Ago
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7 Months Ago
No there isn't, Love is healing and cure!
Truly appreciated dearest Emma your kind words💐
Beautiful poem! I love the way you use the word Between before each stanza, and my love for you at the end of each stanza. Loving and joyous is how I would describe your poem.
Posted 1 Month Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
1 Month Ago
I am truly glad you enjoyed it!
Thank you so much for reaching out and your lovely review �.. read moreI am truly glad you enjoyed it!
Thank you so much for reaching out and your lovely review 🌷
Blessings
:-)))
Much appreciated dear for reading and your superb review! Thank you so much Matthew!
Have a s.. read moreMuch appreciated dear for reading and your superb review! Thank you so much Matthew!
Have a splendid evening.
:-)
'Between the fascinating birds in the forbidden
forest, sweeping around ancient trees,
sheltering the intense heat that flows quietly
across its glittering waters, hides my Love for you.'
Each and every one of your stanzas has a different mood and meaning - but still has to include that precious word. Is ther anything better than Love, Silmara. You create and share unique poetic beauty
Posted 7 Months Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
7 Months Ago
No there isn't, Love is healing and cure!
Truly appreciated dearest Emma your kind words💐
Really love this and the really excellent setting of the Piece. Great Work ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️100/100
Posted 11 Months Ago
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11 Months Ago
Truly appreciated dear😊Thanks indeed for your visit 🌹
Wishing you a very pleasant weeke.. read moreTruly appreciated dear😊Thanks indeed for your visit 🌹
Wishing you a very pleasant weekend.
Hugs
Sil
Is this written as a lovely romantic song? I'm seeing that in this. Lovely words....wonderful thoughts.
Posted 2 Years Ago
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2 Years Ago
Hey! I have not written as a song, but it sure could be one ))) Many thanks indeed Frankie, much app.. read moreHey! I have not written as a song, but it sure could be one ))) Many thanks indeed Frankie, much appreciated.
Stay well and great weekend!!!
)))
Your posted image is so uplifting and your stanzas are romantic and packed with beautiful imagery. The final line in each stanza is particularly effective. Very much enjoyed the natural environment woven into the lines of your romantic offering.
Have a great weekend Sil.
Chris
Posted 2 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
2 Years Ago
Hey darling Chris :-)
Many thanks indeed my dear for your beautiful words and understanding o.. read moreHey darling Chris :-)
Many thanks indeed my dear for your beautiful words and understanding of my writings. God Bless you!
A wonderful week to you with all the happiness!!!
Hugssss
Sil
:-)))
OMG what a magnificent masterpiece my friend!!! I am so happy I stumbled into this, each verse stands alone itself, a breathtaking, a heart stolen piece, something I wish I had written, glorious and heavenly written, I highly applaud You my friend. well done ✨
Posted 3 Years Ago
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3 Years Ago
OHHHHH....I am ever SO happy you enjoyed my poem, truly !!! What a delight to read your special revi.. read moreOHHHHH....I am ever SO happy you enjoyed my poem, truly !!! What a delight to read your special review dear friend....I am all smiles :-))))
Thank ever so much indeed and may God Bless you enormously!!!
3 Years Ago
You are warmly welcome my friend :) You deserve it all, I am happy I made You smile~ Bless You enorm.. read moreYou are warmly welcome my friend :) You deserve it all, I am happy I made You smile~ Bless You enormously too💕
This is one of my favorite poems I've read on here. Just the absolute top of the list. It's so beautiful and flows so wonderfully. It captures love, compares it to weather, colors, animals, everything beautiful and it's just an amazing poem. Sorry if I keep repeating myself, I just really adore this one and am amazed by it!
Posted 3 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
3 Years Ago
Hey :-)
I am so glad you enjoyed my poem, and the ever so kind and wonderful words on it, ple.. read moreHey :-)
I am so glad you enjoyed my poem, and the ever so kind and wonderful words on it, please do not apologise at all for expressing your great reaction to it, I am flattered!
Thank you indeed ;-)))
I often try to see the world with angels eyes...
To leave people better then I found them, even if is just with a smile...
I Love God above all...
Simple love poems are my favourite...
Most of wha.. more..