Surreal Love

Surreal Love

A Poem by Silmara McGarry



Between the gracefulness of butterflies, 
and the enchanting sweet colours of 
a warm spring morning, delivered in the 
most surreal dance, lays my Love for you.

Between the storms in the sky and the blue 
lights that surround the angels in heaven, 
mesmerized by the look in your eyes, 
hypnotized by my Love for you.

Between each wave in the ocean, gripped by 
the motion of fresh winds and one thousand 
innocent pearls, in the hands of the singing 
mermaid, breathing calmly, sails my Love for you.

Between the fascinating birds in the forbidden
forest, sweeping around ancient trees, 
sheltering the intense heat that flows quietly 
across its glittering waters, hides my Love for you. 

Between the moon and earth, and stages of 
glowing stars, twinkling up the dark night 
with promises of light, and the great creations 
of God, reflects my Love for you.

© 2018 Silmara McGarry



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Ohhh-MY, Dear Sil,
And, in Free Verse Quatrains … love it! : )
What a distinct honor and privilege it is to immerse mind, heart, emotions, and soul into such a moving and intricately woven expression of passion breathed out of your depths ⁓ into your fantasy lover's heart.
With genuinely unique and tenderly soothing (albeit stirring) poetic voice and deftly skilled power of stunning metaphorical imagery, combining, heaven, earth, and Nature, your ink sweeps through one's senses as smoothly and seamlessly as windblown silk undulating to the rhythms of a soft, warm summer breeze … and, beginning each verse with "Between" is a stroke of sheer genius that pulls us into every beguiling beginning, as tho' it's a romantic mystery unfolding.

Catching my breath, let me bow most graciously and gratefully in homage and thanks to you for sharing this emblematically gorgeous peek into your heart, thank you sincerely, Sil ⁓ Richard : )


Love the dreamy mood and feel of your picture choice, too!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

1 Year Ago

STUNNING review dear Richard, it will keep me smiling for a longggg time! God Bless indeed!
T.. read more



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Oh wow, I really love this write, this is really good.
Beautifully written!!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much for reading it. I am indeed happy that you love it :-) See you. Sil
Adorable!!!

I think this is the on of the most passionate way of writing love poems, with pure innocence and love it rises high and high and love can reach to those places where no other powers can reach... Your poem leaves me mesmerized and I have deeply felt it's love filled voice... True love reflects it's power even when there is sunlight... Beautifully done frnd...

Sincerely
Dhiman

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

2 Years Ago

Thank you Dhiman, but adorable is your comments! I was waiting for you to read this one because I wa.. read more
Seems with Love everything finds its place and makes it more precious than life. Yet somehow, that life becomes something so normal it doesn't distort emotions. it makes them truer than true.

Your voice really does sing a beautiful tune here' each stanza adds dimension and colour. Each stanza is wonderfully powerful yet laid still with tender hands.. and heart.

Beautiful

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

2 Years Ago

I am in most accordance with your words, It really makes it truer than true. I THANK YOU so very muc.. read more
This is a beautiful write and written with style and perfection! I love it ~Sharon

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

2 Years Ago

Hello Miss Sharon :-) ! Your words feel my heart with delight. I am so very glad you love it. It mea.. read more
Miss Sharon

2 Years Ago

Always my pleasure fellow wordsmith! ~SP
Whoa, this is very beautiful! The first stanza amazed me to know where you were going with it, "lays my love for you." But then your words continued to impress me, because it just got more and more beautiful.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

2 Years Ago

I am so very glad, I can actually feel your positive emotions :-) I am indeed happy to have impress .. read more
Cyprian Van Dyke

2 Years Ago

You're very much welcome! :)
A perfectly painted picture of knowing that to love, you must first accept the love given and know it is real, only then can two hearts and minds connect to give you all you have. Only then can you truly see all the beauty that surrounds us, that somehow goes unnoticed at other times.
Superbly captured thoughts, written from a unique perspective.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

2 Years Ago

Perfectly well said, I couldn't agree more. All is different when seen with the eyes of love. Love y.. read more
Lorry

2 Years Ago

You're welcome :)
Big imagery, describing a love as big as the universe! A poetic and uplifting write!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

2 Years Ago

Sometimes in my wishful thinking, I wonder what would it be if all of us could love and be loved eve.. read more
Stumbling upon these words first thing this morning was an absolute delight. welcome to WC Silmara McGarry & write on......All Good Things, N

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

2 Years Ago

Ohhh....Thank you so much indeed. It means so much to me. And I must thank again for the most warm w.. read more
Neville Pettitt

2 Years Ago

My pleasure entirely.......
Your writing reflects not only the impenetrable bond you share but also a spiritual side to the descriptions you've gracefully painted through each stanza. Images help the reader see your thoughts, these to me are all visual artwork.

Welcome to WC.

Relic.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

2 Years Ago

You got it in perfection what I wanted to pass on. Beautiful words and I kindly thank youuuu! Thanks.. read more

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Added on September 2, 2016
Last Updated on August 24, 2018

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Silmara McGarry
Silmara McGarry

May we find our souls floating in the peaceful waters of it's original place. SM, United Kingdom



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I often try to see the world with angels eyes... To leave people better then I found them, even if is just with a smile... I Love God above all... Simple love poems are my favourite... Most of wha.. more..

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