Feelings

Just a rant

I know I just met her recently
but I've talked to her enough to see
that she means a decent amount to me

I have never met someone
so nerdy and awesome
so able to talk
about comics and manga

She's a nerd like me
in love with books
she's so nice,
kind and sweet

I want to be with her
to hold her tight
to protect her
with my life

to cuddle and love
to live and laugh
... I want to be with her....
do I have a chance...

Reviews

[Lizbeth]

Really enjoyed the fast-moving rhythm of this poem. Hope it is not "just a rant" :)
Loved the lines:
"but I've talked to her enough to see
that she means a decent amount to me"
The choice of words throughout is just right and loved the simplicity.
Thanks for sharing
Lizbeth

[Silent Knight]

Thank you :)

[Silent Knight]

UPDATE

This is old and I don't talk to her anymore. She liked someone way longer than I liked her. Typical. I'll never catch a break.

[Pi Cee]

You will, eventually. At least by then you should know what to really notice.

[Silent Knight]

Well thank you.

[Pi Cee]

Mhm, welcome.

[quinfinn]

why not come out and ask her? we have all been here, my friend...the fear of rejection, if you get snubbed the pain and humiliation only lasts for a short time.
very nice poem!

[Heather's Musings]

very cool poem, hope you took the chance!!

[Dominique]

Why don't you take the chance then?

[Silent Knight]

I like your comment. I actually am. Her sister is actually being pretty helpful lol. I think I may have a shot... I hope so...

[Dominique]

I bet you do. You are a nice guy, and if you are nice to her and respect her than I think you will do great.

[Silent Knight]

Well thanks very much :)