Beauty Survives.

Beauty Survives.

A Poem by Siena - Silent Awakenings.

Beauty can be loved, hated and envied.
Something so beautiful your eyes find it hard to see, you can find it hard to be.

Beauty can be adored, congratulated and taken seriously.
Something so different from your normal life, something that gives you a slight... Satisfaction of what someone really lives like.

Beauty doesn't have to be you, doesn't have to be me, it has to be something 'you' see.
Something that lives in your heart and will never escape.
Something that foreshadows your life in one beautiful way.


© 2011 Siena - Silent Awakenings.



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this is well done how the softness of language and tone match the font characters and sentiments. "Beauty can be adored, congratulated and taken seriously." stands against the norm of objectifying, and makes the entire piece not only well written but worthwhile. thank you.

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Beauty is something beyond the eye's glance - so I kinda disagree with the first line of the third stanza. I think you don't really have to see beauty, you can just...feel it. But looking at the rest of the poem, I suppose that was your point.
Good job.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is well done how the softness of language and tone match the font characters and sentiments. "Beauty can be adored, congratulated and taken seriously." stands against the norm of objectifying, and makes the entire piece not only well written but worthwhile. thank you.

Posted 5 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I agree with Coyote Poetry, outer beauty may fade, while inner beauty is everlasting. Beauty is truly in the eye of the beholder and can be found anywhere.
I enjoyed reading this, it is in good form and flows nicely.

"Beauty doesn't have to be you, doesn't have to be me, it has to be something 'you' see.
Something that lives in your heart and will never escape.
Something that foreshadows your life in one beautiful way."

...I like this last stanza, it says everything :)

Well done, Keep writing! :)








Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This makes me think of a girlfriend I was really close with in High School. I loved her, and she was beautiful. Your words, here, are very sweet and lovely. I loved this read. Thank you.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Real beauty will last a lifetime. Outer beauty may fade away. A kind and loving heart will have friends and family near forever. That is real beauty. I like your strong description leading the reader to a very good ending. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i love your writing and this has to be one of my favorites :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nicely put..

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great writing and a very true look at beauty. Beauty on the outside can sometimes be controversial, but the beauty on the inside is what's strived for and "will never escape".

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yes, couldn't agree more on the definition. Beauty, is also in this poem. Loved it.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love the word beautiful, it is may favorite word.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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