Something a little different this month...
This is a quote from a discussion thread in a forum.
Use this quote as if it were a poem, and write a poem in response to
the lines that stand out for you:
The lines that stood out for me were:
you are (I am) alive with the pain.
As much as I love peace, I want to be moving fast
Written for a Quotes That Inspire Challenge
Picture Challenge
and
Word Challenge (Color)
Using the words:
white - blue - grey - vibrant - opaque -
dark - bright - black - ruddy
© 2008 SilentDream (All rights reserved) 11/11/08
And my response:
Shades of Sighs
(Tumbling Tercets)
Pain stipples
ruddy color
onto my cheeks, though
vibrant shades of sighs
spill forth from parted lips.
I find I’m dipped in
blue as
solemn shadows hold me…
returning me to days of
grey and tears I know too
well. But it’s those
dark
times that have made me
resilient. And on
bright,
white pages the curves
of words and smudges
of
black ink bring clarity
to what used to be
opaque
Quote:
Originally Posted by Dr_Xgriz  eventually a peaceful life gets really boring and you want to stir some sh*t up in the hopes that it gets exciting
but
having a chaotic life does have its positives, for instance you have the feeling you are alive with the pain.
so all in all
I would go for that mix
As much as I love peace, I want to be moving fast and hitting the high road
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