Newborn Star

Basically, a girl is left by the one she loves and then learns she is better off without the pain, and is born into a stronger shining star.

Dreams of you float in my head 

I paint a picture of your lovely face

All the words I never said

All our memories wrapped in lace

An empty place in my mind

A hole you left deep inside

Everything you left behind 

Everywhere I go to hide 

Left with nothing but an image of you

A hole inside, another scar

Now as I say goodbye, too

Turned into a newborn star 

Author's Note

I haven't written a poem in a very long time, I'm trying to get back into the habit. I love writing them. So, please be nice!

Reviews

[khalid]

wowww you havent written for long time and you write such a great piece?i am eager to read what you will write when the habit is back then although i dont think there can be more sweet than what you have already written here! this poem with all the love and passion images you have drawn, with such nice words picking...i have really enjoyed every line of it

[Unavailable]

=D That was awesome.

You're really good right now. Imagine when you are really back to into your habit

I will look forward to reading more poems for you.

Btw, your penname fits you =D

[Serena Kaye]

Really good.
Way to go for not writing in a long time

[Katty]

I like it very much! its a great poem, especially since you havent written a poem in a while. Very Very impressed :)

[SilentWhisper324]

Oh my gosh, thank you so much! This means the world to me.

[0AudreyClaire0]

This is really good. It flowed very well. :)
-Aud