im the one

im the one who stands around

im the one who usually has a frown

im the one you walk on by

im the one who you wouldnt notice when i die

im the one who you dont really know

im the one who, you wouldnt care if i go

im the one who hates rejection

im the one who doesnt get that much attention

im the one who may look happy but is no

im the one who obsesivly thinks about death, quit a lot

im the one who would go crazy if i lose her

im the one who is the biggest loser

im the one who hates each and every day

im the one who just cant keep going this way

im the one who doesnt want to stay

im the one who is in everyones way

Author's Note

theres more to this poem, this is just that only part i remember. the last verse i changed because i dont have my poem book at the moment

Reviews

[Sue]

Dark but true - know the feeling of invisibility.....

[silently leathel]

thanks for the review. its a harsh feeling but finally its getting better! hope things are well for you.

[AmandaN]

Nice flow Lacy,thanks for sharing.
You capture very nicely that feeling of invisibility and disconnection that us poets struggle with in our dark moments. Keep it up.

[silently leathel]

thanks for the review. its a harsh feeling but finally its getting better! hope things are well for you.