Prologue

Prologue

A Chapter by SilverInk

Just look at her.

Here was this child, giggling and reaching for my hand mere hours after her birth. Could any infant convert to such happiness so soon?

She dared to challenge my intellect.  Green eyes that were swimming with curiosity and a smile that was mischievously playful.

He used to smile like that. But His smile was long gone.

I won’t let that happen again.





© 2017 SilverInk



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This is a great hook. Short and succinct, but it gets my attention right away. Well done!

Yari

Posted 2 Months Ago


SilverInk

2 Months Ago

Thanks for reading!
Wow that was short but beautiful. It quickly pulls the read in and makes them want to read more.

Posted 3 Months Ago


SilverInk

3 Months Ago

Thanks for reviewing!
Beautiful beginning to what I'm sure will be an emotional story. I like it. To see a face so new, so full of life, and so serene with so many possibilities and so many hopes and dreams, a fresh beginning.

Posted 3 Months Ago


SilverInk

3 Months Ago

So glad you were able to interpret it!
A great intro that leaves the reader wanting more. Good job!

Posted 3 Months Ago


SilverInk

3 Months Ago

Thanks for reviewing!
the contrast is at once heart warming and tragic ... the resolve is so strong ...its sad that your protagonist may never let another "He" in again ;(
i like the images the brevity and the depth of feelings that go with maternal "en face"
E.

Posted 3 Months Ago


SilverInk

3 Months Ago

Glad you liked it!
Interesting. I liked the concept.

Posted 3 Months Ago


SilverInk

3 Months Ago

Thanks for reading!
Najam Us Saher

3 Months Ago

You're welcome.

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