Be Strong

Simple but Complex

A simple  advice

A common  syllable

A powerful  phrase

But, adorable expression

 

I  couldn’t  explain why!

I  felt  floating in the sky

I’ll  keep my eyes open

That  makes me believe

 

Your  gentle whisper

Speech about truth

I began to confuse

So, close your eyes

 

To realize,

“Every time, I feel down;

Just recall this advice”

Because my spirit flows

In you… Always 

Reviews

[Shy Girl]

My goodness your friends inspire wonderful creations from you. All have a message and are for a reason you have chosen to write for... and just where can one find friends so wonderful? I sure would love to meet one or two myself... Always love to read your inspiring poems. Thank you for the RR. :)

[Poppie Mira]

Simple and nicely done!

[afra]

well done ...keep writing

[Amata Luna]

Yeah right. :)) Another poem for a friend. I was thinking who inspired you this time? ;) Thanks for sharing this Kuhr. Nice. :D

[dan nacario]

very inspiring..nicely done

[Coyote Poetry]

Wise words in this poem. "Be strong". Stand your ground and never bow to no-one. I like the thoughts in the amazing poem.
Coyote

[luna11]

I like it. It's simple, but well written.
Well done :)

[w]

Not a bad piece. Very basic, but gets its point across. As a side note, the font is horrible and hard to read.

[emrick]

Honestly,this is Wow.

[Pax]

'I began to confuse' this line confuse me just like the word. ;) hehe
anyways i really enjoyed the flow of this poem
a touch of friendship and a little bit of romantically cute.