Let go

Let go

A Poem by Angel of the devil

He wants
to be with
her
But he 
can't let go 
of the 
past
He wants to 
be the one
to hold 
her 
While she is 
happy
While she is 
depressed
While she is 
crying
He wants to 
hold her through
everything
But to do 
that
He has to 
let go
He must let
go of the 
past
To be with 
her
He must 
move on with 
his future 
with her
And she will wait
to be with 
him
To truly 
be with her 
She will wait
for him to give 
his heart
his whole 
heart
to her
As she has given 
her heart 
to him

© 2016 Angel of the devil



Author's Note

Angel of the devil
i just wrote this last night

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the poem did good at communicating being torn. torn between two. letting go is the easy part, its the reality that things are never the same. Someone here is trying while feeling sidestepped and non-exclusive. Love starts to not feel sacred, then what. Just my take,its just what the poem surfaced for me. is a really strong write!

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Angel of the devil

8 Months Ago

thank you very much for your review!



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A realistic and true poem. Love can't grow in the dirt of dead earth. I like the want and honest tone of the words. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Angel of the devil

8 Months Ago

thank you very much for your review!
Coyote Poetry

8 Months Ago

You are welcome.
the poem did good at communicating being torn. torn between two. letting go is the easy part, its the reality that things are never the same. Someone here is trying while feeling sidestepped and non-exclusive. Love starts to not feel sacred, then what. Just my take,its just what the poem surfaced for me. is a really strong write!

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Angel of the devil

8 Months Ago

thank you very much for your review!
All or nothing! There is no going back now.Only a fool would try to hold back and not take that complete leap of faith - her heart in hand and make that move to bliss.
I loved this Rose.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Angel of the devil

8 Months Ago

Thank you very much. i will be updating it as i write more on it. i hope you will like it
Tony Jordan

8 Months Ago

No probs Rose.
:D
Angel of the devil

8 Months Ago

still thank you
Not bad. Not bad at all. I enjoyed reading this. This sounds like one heck of a complex relationship! Overall, you did a good job writing this. There is only one thing I have to point out. Look at the section below that I've put quotations around.

And she will wait
to be with
him
"To truly
be with her"
She will wait
for him to give

I think you meant to put "him" instead or "her". Other than that, I don't have anything to point out. Good job. Keep on writing! :)

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Angel of the devil

10 Months Ago

thank you very much
This is a deep poem about how he needs to let go of the past in order to hold her.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Angel of the devil

10 Months Ago

thank you for your review and for taking the time to read this
Reading this just made my eyes wet ... You know how much this relates to me...

Posted 10 Months Ago


Uday Bhasuthker

10 Months Ago

Thanks for sharing
Angel of the devil

10 Months Ago

thank you for reading and reviewing this.
Beautiful! Falling in love while the other foot stayed in the past. Come one dude give yourself full to the girl! ~cheering Rose! :)

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Angel of the devil

10 Months Ago

thank you very much!
YanZeros

10 Months Ago

*on... You're Welcome! :D
Angel of the devil

10 Months Ago

:) so how are you
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Sky
Yes, sometimes you need to let go the past memories to light up yourl present and to sparkle the future. Nice poem!

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Angel of the devil

11 Months Ago

thank you. i agree
Letting go of the past is something thats not easy.. I liked the flow of your composition.☺

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

This ten characters thing is really irritating 😂
Angel of the devil

11 Months Ago

ikr! it is so annoying. somedays i just want to scream bc of it
Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Yeah ( sigh)
I like it it's deep and sweet

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Angel of the devil

11 Months Ago

thank you!

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