A Poem by Simba

Romantic energy

Silk crisp sheets robed across the bed as I lie my gaze softened upon your glory, long poise stature cultivates my mind, I slowly run my fingers from the nape of his neck to the bottom of his spine. Tantalising energy ignites in flames, roaring hearts entwine famished from the fight

© 2017 Simba

Author's Note

appreciating the one you love

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I have to say well done as you write so well....but I don't get life from your view point so I find it hard to find meaning and feeling in your words....

I wake open wounds stuck to a stained mattress...darkened from the blood of my cuts day after day.....my world is dark and very unhappy.....I don't feel love and I don't give love.....

so I'm not the right person to comment on poems of hope and future emotion.

I do like what you have done and I like your talent.....thank you for asking me to be honest.

it means a lot you asked me.

Posted 1 Year Ago

This is really beautifully described.

Posted 1 Year Ago

Eloquent and powerful imagery. Great job setting a mood and conveying passion in a few words. Nice work!

Posted 1 Year Ago

The lines are providing the images,to imagine....and superbly written

Posted 1 Year Ago

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Added on December 28, 2017
Last Updated on December 28, 2017
Tags: love, Romantic, passion, sexy, desire



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A Poem by Simba