Destination

Destination

A Poem by simba
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Not knowing not believing not even being just survival

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Spirit awoken from within my soul
I breathe in destiny
no extension no reprieve
rightly or wrongly we shall see the fate that’s left me drifting free

My inner desire to clench tight to grasp with all my fight, acceptance shall be rejected
all emotion evicted

Stuck in this limbo is this destiny
For I live for nothingness
No hollow winds can set me free

Losing all faith I lose my grip and fall into the echo of the deep dark pit
Destiny has chosen me....

© 2017 simba



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Your poem certainly conveys the darkest emotions, especially despair. I believe many will identify with your words. This is depression in a poem.

Among the most striking phrases, "For I live for nothingness," hit me hard. This statement expresses our desire to live with purpose, to find our "why," and your poem conveys that human desire to find hope. While the reader may not see it directly, the poem itself is evidence hope lives. Nice piece.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


interesting thoughts ..kind of transcendental, fatalistic spiritualism ;)
a meditative state of letting go ... feel the fear of loosing something that defines us ...that empty ...that neither beacons nor rejects ..only our own selves that do that ...thought provoking and inspiring says i!
E.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Stuck in this limbo is this destiny
For I live for nothingness
No hollow winds can set me free

Losing all faith I lose my grip and fall into the echo of the deep dark pit
Destiny has chosen me....


TOTALLY love this part, this is a deep write. emotional as well. Very nicely expressed

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Very somber.it sounds as if you're lost in despair. You're looking for a way out of this dark hole and you've given up looking.don't give up.find a way out

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Powerful my friend! though You ended it in that sad way, and that You are speaking about You, being lost, being nothing... but I will hold on into Your first two verses,

" Spirit awoken from within my soul
I breathe in destiny
no extension no reprieve
rightly or wrongly we shall see the fate that’s left me drifting free

My inner desire to clench tight to grasp with all my fight, acceptance shall be rejected
all emotion evicted "

What I see here a poem it self, a positive one, the real awaken of the mind, that You alone, and Your mind can do it, can do anything, rise even over what is called "fate" even changing the destiny, no acceptance for any more unnecessary hurts, and the mind can do it my friend! yes You can!

I wish You the warmest, most soothing Sunshine to caress gently Your troubled heart, much Love to You*

Posted 2 Weeks Ago



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Added on December 30, 2017
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Tags: Fate, destiny, evil, good, bad, feelings, emotion

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simba
simba

United Kingdom



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