How I feel?

Long over due

Apology

Forgiving smiles

Losing

Hope, strongly

Weeping

Look to the sky

Deep in sorrow

Thoughts,

Letting go

Close

My eyes and say

Good-bye

Reviews

[MsMermaid]

Beautiful words? How can words of such despair and sorrow be beautiful? It seems you are saying with this that you feel disjointed, depressed, suicidal, endless weeping, to the point of giving up, letting go, overdose on those pills, close your eyes and say goodbye to this cruel world. Your art is good, but so dark. I suppose that is what you are going for. Perhaps you miscalculate the power of words to manifest reality. If you dwell in that dark place too long it can consume you.

[Break The Broken]

love the fomatting, its ifferne yet, not too distracting from the beautiful words written! c:

[The Girl with the smile]

I love how you wrote this poem! Very creative. Nice!