A Girl and a Flower

A Girl and a Flower

A Poem by Janice

 
For thine has picked 1000 flowers
But none to be as fair as you
As you possess the scent of succulent and sensuous love
That brings a smitten smile unto thy wounded heart
For you alone possess the eyes of forbidden beauty
As you expose so freely to me all of your glorious splendor
Allowing me to completely take you in
And inhale you deep inside of my aching soul
I shall caress your stem firmly
Abundant with prickly and spiny thorns
 So sharp that they pierce deeply into my transparent skin
To reveal unto me liquid droplets of my red agony
To let me feel thy throbbing
Pain once again
I have come to recognize now
 That I am truly alive within you
For I shall rejoice in our farewell
 As I gently pluck your soft and silky pedals one by one
I can almost feel you fiercely trembling now
Between my tender finger tips
Almost as if you are pleading with me to stop
But for you I shall not
 As you to me are still the fairest of them all
So in grave tribute to you
I will now save you from a withered and darkened death
I shall toss you up back unto the virgin earth
and let the unruly winds carry you away
Where I will humbly sacrifice you to the next
 Who shall stumble unto your supreme but silent wisdom
and awe-inspiring  grace

 

© 2009 Janice


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oh wonder sweet words,so nice
i picked as many flowers ,none as sweet and fair as you
your scent and sensuos love brings smile to your wounded heart
you have the eyes of forbidden beauty that so shines
as you expose all that splendour to me
i inhale you deep into my aching soul
caress your beautiful stem so firm
full with prickly and spiny thorns
they will pierce into my skin to make me bleed
and reveal red liquid of deep agony
so i feel your throbbing pain,i feel it through me
the pain once again..
i can see i really live within you
i could almost feel you trembling so fierce
like pleading with me to stop..but i shall not
as i feel you the fairest of them all
and so i will save you from a withered and darkened death
what a great feeling i see here ,so lovely ,so nice
lovely write

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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very dark almost being taken without being asked.
But then it also sounds like a trust was found.
I see happiness in death.

What ever it about I know its a wonderful write.
Thanks for sharing Janice it's going into my fav's

Kelley

Posted 15 Years Ago


oh wonder sweet words,so nice
i picked as many flowers ,none as sweet and fair as you
your scent and sensuos love brings smile to your wounded heart
you have the eyes of forbidden beauty that so shines
as you expose all that splendour to me
i inhale you deep into my aching soul
caress your beautiful stem so firm
full with prickly and spiny thorns
they will pierce into my skin to make me bleed
and reveal red liquid of deep agony
so i feel your throbbing pain,i feel it through me
the pain once again..
i can see i really live within you
i could almost feel you trembling so fierce
like pleading with me to stop..but i shall not
as i feel you the fairest of them all
and so i will save you from a withered and darkened death
what a great feeling i see here ,so lovely ,so nice
lovely write

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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