Snowy sunset love

how do you love? ..like the snow and sun, they drift away yet stay together..

Living through the sunshine,

Waiting for the night sky,

Searching for the lone bright star.

Unaware of what love is,

Unsure of what I know;

Melting like a burning snow,

Burning in a wondrous glow,

Tilting on the horizon's low,

Mesmerized by the way it thrives,

Twinkling in the play of all.

White in the dark,

Black in the light,

Come together to make it right;

Shows the path,

Bows; provides the might,

Drifting through the time,

Takes me on a stride,

Only to return in pride,

Every step, every breath in me abides.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the title. Give balance and interest to the poem. I liked how to defined and explained love in the poem. You made it easy to understand with your very good description. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Sindu]

Thanks a lot Coyote! That's a great review. I actually changed the title twice from ' how do you love?' To this.

[Coyote Poetry]

It is a good title and you are welcome.

[MomzillaNC]

I think this is a good answer to my challenge. Make sure you go to the group page, click on "New Writings" and post it there too.

[Sindu]

Thanks a lot Momzi!! :D I surely do that..

[MomzillaNC]

You're welcome.

[ayesha gupta]

that was beautiful. loved it.
thanks for sharing..

[Sindu]

Thanks a bunch Ayesha !! :))

[Briana O'Connor]

Beautiful and effortless, your words flowed magically. A deep, mesmerizing thought, indeed. Thank you for sharing.

[Sindu]

Thanks a lot Brianna!

[ManasaC]

i really like it. very good

[Sindu]

Thank you!

[Surya pradha]

liked it a lot. good use of rhyme.

[Sindu]

I try.. Thanks a lot!