Chousing Karoake!!

A tune of tricked way of life.. A collab by Sindu and Pushkar Prabhat..

Planets move in elleptical beauty

seasons, sun and moons;

birds flew, animals grew;

life's rhythm drifting 

in the same old groove.

Here comes the story, 

much cut-and-dry.

Bit by bit, clockwise scaled:

Mandatory schematic:

With a choice, but vague;

Like a rigged roulette.

Discrete indulgence,

taken crazy measures;

built up a routine,

adored or abhorred.

The prized disgust;

Of guilty, habits:

Unnecessary accessory,

Like jewellery for jewellery.

Pointless, thoughtless,

Yet, like innate reflex.

Along with the sun

and by the moon ,

tracing the smile

with a frown, bittersweet;

manuvering like a nutcase

at a neck- break pace!

Liberation!

we all demand.

we all dream:

to break away.....

Away, away....

that's a nightmare!

Measuring ones worth in 

zeroes and digits tearable;

dipping in this morose melody,

hoping to keep up with the time:

procrastination, here it comes! 

Time!! 

What time!? 

A complaint at every move.. 

Stop!

move forward;

and take control.

just maintain a pace:

and commit to the role.

'coz 

wink of a crack 

is all it takes

to breach the daze 

of this methodical maze.

Author's Note

This is a poem put togetherby Pushkar and I.
Review away!

Reviews

[R Smith]

I see the beauty of the planets whirling in space matched against the hopelessness of life in the mundane world where accessories mean more than love and compassion, we want to break free, escape the materialism and move on coz yes a wink of a crack and we see the maze that confines us within the boundaries set by social demands, escape is there, just look through the veil, thank you Sindu and Pushkar :)

[Sindu]

We thank you Richard! That was a brilliant review and you hit the point across! :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you are welcome Richard and thank you so much for appreciating!!! :) :)

[Saddam]

Nice collaboration with a flow....
Good one friend. Keep going it to the peak...........

[Surya pradha]

seems quite professional, this is a really good piece of poetry. nice work by pushkar and you.

[Sindu]

Wow! Professional is a big term Surya ^_^ thanks a lot..

[M.A.Rathore]

The best opening with the description of nature and it affects the growth of seasons.The rhythem of poem combines with the rhythem of life. Overall is a good reading..

[Sindu]

Thank you Rathore for a nice review!

[M.A.Rathore]

Welcome. It's my pleasure..

[Avinash]

A wonderful smooth collab between you two. It was a pleasure reading from first to last word.
I can guess it is beginning of something good :)

[Sindu]

Thank you so much Avinash! Let's hope so :) it was fun writing this out.

[Mayank]

I am f*****g procrastinator... i liked what your thoughts are conveying here, nice collab.

[Sindu]

Thanks Mayank! I guess everyone's a bit of it, me included

[ManasaC]

very nice. A nice boost to all those who procrastinate:-)

[Sindu]

Yes it is, manasa. Thanks a lot :)

[MomzillaNC]

Lovely collaboration

NOTES: "Chousing Karaoke" should be "Choosing Karaoke"

[Sindu]

Thank you Momzi!
I meant chousing as in tricking.

[MomzillaNC]

Oh. My apologies, I wasn't familiar with that word. Okay. I need to read this again. Whole different meaning. Please send me another RR; I'm on my way out the door just now.

[Sindu]

Oh not a problem Momzi! Well that only makes me glad that you can have a second read ;)

[hardeep sabharwal]

a very nice collaboration, imagery is so good with apt choice of words, thanks for letting me read

[Sindu]

Thank you Hardeep :)

[jennifer little]

nice poem i enjoyed it keep up the good work

[Sindu]

Thanks a lot Jens !