Laughable Life!

flip side of the coin..

A monstrous melody

This tragic threnody

A perfect parody

And minute malady

With tornado twists 

Tiny bags of bliss

From merry musketeers

Inured: grueling games

Laughable life indeed!

Reviews

[Rounak Jain]

This one is Laaaajawaaab.

[Saddam]

Amazing write here dear............ Fantastic formation. Love this.

[Sindu]

Thanks a lot SSADD!

[TheLostMind]

Fantastic wordplay.. :P.. Small, yet meaningful.. "Laughable life indeed!" - It all depends on how you take it.. :P..

[Sindu]

Yes it is! Definitely how ever one takes it.
The words can create a diff picture for every one ;)
Thanks a lot :)

[TheLostMind]

Different people can create different pictures (for themselves) from the same set of words :P.. And you are welcome.. :)

[Jamsheed Shafi]

great selection of words.
good rhyming scheme.
keep writing.

[Sindu]

Thanks Jamsheed :)

[Surya pradha]

brilliant use of words. very descriptive and satisfying, good work!

[Sindu]

Thank you so much Surya :)

[MomzillaNC]

Playful and alliterative way to speak of the confusion that is Life.

[Sindu]

Thanks Momzi! At point, everything seems amusing

[MomzillaNC]

YVW. You know you've made it through and overcome it when you can look back and laugh!

[Sindu]

Definitely. Seems overwhelming but great to see it's done and dealt with.

[Sanjh]

Wonderful selection of words Sindu, it's short but it seems, whole life is covered in just 9 lines...
great work...:)

[Sindu]

Thanks Sanjh! I was surprised it worked out

[Mayank]

Technically, it's crafted beautifully. There are two images and both are brilliantly presented.

[Sindu]

Thanks Mayank. It's great review. I confused myself and wondered if everyone can see it :P

[Mayank]

I recently read a poetry of a very famous Indian poet, in fact the name of his poetry was Two Images.

[Sindu]

Wow that's nice. Message me the name?

[Mayank]

I will check and let you know.

[Avinash]

Tides are unpredictable especially those happening inside mind. An intelligent write.

[Sindu]

Thanks Avinash. Everything seems more than it it when seen from a relative point. :)

[AprilRN1210]

fun word play throughout!.. this makes you think without knowing it.. nicely done ma'am.. you know I love the alliteration :)

[Sindu]

Thanks April. I did think about you when I wrote it ;) :P haha.
That's great to know this can make ppl think.