Sweetest Dreams

Sweetest Dreams

A Poem by Sindu

The signature click of the clock
spreads a miasma undeniably sweet
Drowns every hope, every plea
Transfigures every minute detail
clogs every crack and crevice
in and out, surrounding me.

As my hands start to clam
eyes close in despair, unknowingly 
setting the mental demons free.
Lungs suffocate within their confines
contract and expand to breath
as the pulse plummets down
shaky breathe stutters past my lips
desperate to taste the words of plea.

A tingling passes down my neck
arches my spine in a blasting pain
tears trickle past my open eyes
trying desperately to break free,
from his toxic serenading tune
twisting and tugging at my sanity.
He slowly brushes those cold digits
tantalizingly down my breast to navel
chuckles darkly in my ear
promising, ' sweetest dreams, my sweet!'

© 2015 Sindu



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This was quite thrilling read. Sudden departure from your regular style but a welcome one.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sindu

2 Years Ago

Thank you! Yes! Sudden departures are kind of fun :)
Twisted and dark, this how my night are... felt like you stole my thoughts :p

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sindu

2 Years Ago

I copyrighted them now ;)
You can borrow the thoughts, though :P
a dark poem of love this takes us on a fearful ride into sensual despair trying to escape his advances its like you're under attack by some sexual demon, 'those cold digits' did it for me, his attentions are unwanted and the fear is prevalent, nightmare or actual attack Sindu ? Brilliant writing :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sindu

2 Years Ago

Let's say a psychotic inccubus :P
At first I pictured it to be an actual attack: scene unfol.. read more
A dark, mildly disturbing seduction

NOTES: "shaky [breath] stutters past my lips"

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sindu

2 Years Ago

I would say highly disturbing :P thank you!!
MomzillaNC

2 Years Ago

yw :)
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A great Juxtaposition of eeriness with the "Sweet Dreams" title. Vivid description of what the unknown. Well done Sindu :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sindu

2 Years Ago

Thanks a lot, moon! Yep, something so good can be so eerie in such a situation.
As a fan of the twisted this was quite an entertaining read. I love the great mixture of seduction and thrill. The darkness is overwhelming with each descending line. Such wonderful penmenship here. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sindu

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much Briana! It's great to know this can have an effect on you :)
A lovely mixture of the dark and passionate. Great penning.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sindu

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much Pryde!
yeah - oh dark indeed - what's going on chickface?

if your aim was to create the scene, paint by numbers and join the dots to create for me a vision of horror then well done you have done this ... I believe you can get rid of the word 'my' in the third last line for more unjutted flow ...

now who is this darkness and how can we expel him from your words ???

you are a natural by the way - don't ever stop writing XX

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sindu

2 Years Ago

I thought about it but did not construct it yet.

Ya, I came to terms with it and try.. read more
KWP

2 Years Ago

It is what it is right soulgypsy ??? :)))))
Sindu

2 Years Ago

:D hehe! very much, yes!! I like that term ^_^
As my hands start to clam
eyes close in despair, unknowingly
setting the mental demons free.

Little bit dark but expressing well.
Sorry first I delete my comment, because of misunderstanding. Thanks for sharing your writes. looking more from you dear.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sindu

2 Years Ago

Oh it's alright saddam and thank you :) I wanted it to be dark so I guess it shows..
WoW!!!!
creepy beautiful dark
waise jyada samajh nhi aaya but kamaal likha h!!!!
i loved iy!!!
:)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sindu

2 Years Ago

Thank you Pushkar. Lehkin agar samajh nahi hua tho kaise kah sakte ho ki yeh acha hai ji. May be aap.. read more

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