Emotions

Emotions

A Poem by Sindu

Emotions

 

These creepers instilled in mind

 

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as sanity's pill

 

conquer the being, sublime

 

c r a c k..

 

to surface

 at peril.

 


© 2015 Sindu



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mou
very tough to deal with emotion which acts just like our own enemy sometimes..
beautiful

Posted 10 Months Ago


Just a wonderful write here on emotions.
Love it.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Creepy, dark, emotive, I need pill as well.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Never fight your emotions … then they become stronger …:) A great visual and emotive piece.

Posted 2 Years Ago


those emotions are driving you to intriguing writing Sindu, a most unusual and deeply aware write, very well done :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sindu

2 Years Ago

Haha I took a standpoint away from myself to see what buggers yhese creepers are and how mich effect.. read more
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Sometimes I am not sure if that mind of yours ever rests :) an intriguing write. I am still gathering insight about you, and will PM you soon with some good insight :)

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sindu

2 Years Ago

My mind takes it on itself to work like a bee in a hive whether I'm asleep or awake:) thanks, moon. .. read more
Metaphor use is really good!
Clinging to sanity's pill makes me smile
almost serves as a oxymoron:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sindu

2 Years Ago

Thanks James. Aren't oxymorons the best? :)
Remember, I commented on your poem emotions that .. read more
Jamestown

2 Years Ago

I do remember my friend and glad I was able to read
and enjoy, love the creativity in this, t.. read more
WoW!!!
perfect definition!!!
perfect metaphors.....
awesome!!!
i loved it!!!!
:)

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Posted 2 Years Ago


Sindu

2 Years Ago

Thank you :)
But seriously critic -_-
Pushkar Prabhat

2 Years Ago

yes seriously awesome!!! :) :)

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