Stone hedge hogs and mystic lanes

Stone hedge hogs and mystic lanes

A Poem by Sindu
"

Waiting to break free..

"
Milestones as
stone hedgehogs 
claim pit stops
along rugged path.

Tar rubbled roads
winding through
peaks and trees
claim the journey.

Lone traveller 
behind the wheel,
on foot, moves
in the search.

Eyes brimmed
piled emotions
anguish to extinguish
hope to renew.

Crunching gravel under
chain rimmed wheels, 
tales filled boots,
muffle the silence.

Moving along 
mystic lanes
with hedgehog pals
time trickles.

Into digits
memories
Sun and dawn
Stars and night.

Lone in search 
stripped off bounds
Every tear dripped
eases the step.

Imprinting smiles
tears and joy
peace in fight
Claim the essence of life.

© 2015 Sindu



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I love your imaginative skills sindhu
"Eyes brimmed
piled emotions
anguish to extinguish
hope to renew.
This was the best that grabbed my attention
Excellent work and well written

Posted 1 Month Ago


I love the visions you created with your words. I felt like I was going on a journey through each line. Nicely written. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sindu

2 Years Ago

Glad this could take you on a journey. Hope you enjoyed it.. thank you :)
just a fabulous art dear and beloved poet...
my favorite is this

Lone traveller
behind the wheel,
on foot, moves
in the search.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sindu

2 Years Ago

Thanks a lot Saddam. Glad you liked those few :)
Saddam

2 Years Ago

You are most welcome
oh I want to break free... oh! I got to break free.... *can't sing it like mercury*
The wanderers always know things that are better than any of our bookish knowledge, when you stay away, unattached from the family or friends but get attached to the nature and other aspects of the world, that's probably the best essence of life.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sindu

2 Years Ago

I agree! Like I say to myself: attach less, care less, expect less and get hurt less. Unfortunately .. read more
amazing poem Sindu, the format is unique at least to me it is, its a testimony to your skill that you can impart so much meaning with so few words, that takes real skill i think, great writing :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sindu

2 Years Ago

That means a lot Richard:) Amazingly lot! Trying to decrease my words usage and stoked to see you ca.. read more
WoW!!!!
amazing poem.....
awesome images.....
masterfully written.....capturing "the essence of life."
i loved it!!!
:)


Posted 2 Years Ago


Sindu

2 Years Ago

Thanks Pushkar :)
Nice one chick - very inspired - I see you stripped this one right down - just like we need to do in life - we all must walk the path - which ever path we choose no matter - so long as we remember to live - accept - experience - love along the way right? - its all in front of us - its all within us - and if we take a wrong turn - a wrong path - well plenty more hedgehog pals along the way - i can see where this is travelling and it is well worth the journey me thinks XX

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sindu

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much :) yup lot of pals to meet n overcome.. *stuffing my backpack and waiting for the.. read more

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