Salted Caramel lips and Calender dreams

Salted Caramel lips and Calender dreams

A Poem by Sindu

I know 
I believe
there's a day marked 
in my bright calendar
fluttering in dawning breeze
twined in summer heat

I hope 
I dream
Of you, with me swaying along
twinkling laughter in your eyes
telling stories and captivating me
promising me promises I wish to see

I love 
I feel
all melting care you shower
your fingers tracing little maps
those salted caramel lips mesmerizing me
whispering into morrows as todays flee.  

© 2015 Sindu



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Author's Note

Sindu
Genre I rarely write in
Heart thumping as I type
Posting before I change my mind
Now enjoy this din

* hides behind something hide-able*

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Very steamy, sensual write, but still sweet and romantic.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sindu

2 Years Ago

Thank you. that's about all of it.
MomzillaNC

2 Years Ago

yvw :D
This is a beautiful write girlie.so very romantic and sweet!
Your Authors notes made me laugh...you are too funny! You have not need to hide, you are a very talented writer and this is proof of that!!
Love it! :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sindu

2 Years Ago

=) Thank you so much for loving it and laughing too.. :)
Summer is rising temperature. Loved the analogy and morphology.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sindu

2 Years Ago

Yes, it is :D Thank you!
Your poetry wonderful and sweet.
"I love
I feel
all melting care you shower
your fingers tracing little maps
those salted caramel lips mesmerizing me
whispering into morrows as todays flee. "
The above lines could stand alone. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry for love.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sindu

2 Years Ago

Thanks a lot Coyote. Yes, you are right.. they can. I did not see that :)
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

You are welcome. I enjoy your work.
Sindu

2 Years Ago

I enjoy yours too.
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jb
Nice romantic poem indeed!.....good job

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sindu

2 Years Ago

Thank you :D
jb

2 Years Ago

Your so welcome!
Haha! Good write, I didn't expect such piece from you, but the romance tinkles and that is visible.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sindu

2 Years Ago

I like to surprise ;) Thank ya..
Pretty good if you usually don't write! Nice job!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sindu

2 Years Ago

Thank you Claus. I get all shy and embarrassed so I never ( almost) wrote this kind.
T.S. Claus

2 Years Ago

Don't be! Everyone is creative and great in their own way. Besides, no one knows you on here! Haha I.. read more
Sindu

2 Years Ago

I agree. It's just that this is relatively new and different thing to what i write.. But that gives .. read more
this is nice...a fresh one...i enjoyed it!!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sindu

2 Years Ago

Thank you Manasa :) trying my hand at it
I like this write Sindu... it's always good to step out of your comfort zone and try something new to keep those creative juices flowing. Good work :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sindu

2 Years Ago

Yes, comfort zone kills. So, I stepped out with a great difficulty and trying not running back like .. read more
you should write this genre' more Sindu, you are clearly very good at it, this an excellent poem, exudes quality and poetic right to its heart, well done :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sindu

2 Years Ago

Thanks a lot Richard for such overwhelming response. I am still trying to not be embarrassed about i.. read more

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