Anamoly

sad rant

Words and terms 

written with rhyme

bound in rhythm

reader a victim

As time flies

so does

 my making lies

hard to fantasize

in turn vulgarize 

laced with irk 

sanity lurks 

covered in plight

there goes

my light

Same stories play

as reels fray

news is a game 

political strain

routine a glitch

'let's find

someone to snitch'

why does one do that?

be a carnivorous rat

ruined is my appetite 

nothing anymore satisfies 

Author's Note

Good or bad, say whatever you have to say.

Reviews

[hardeep sabharwal]

Really good, and its flow is so natural, I really enjoyed this

[Sindu]

Thank you so much for enjoying it :D

[~]

And the eerie dark side has lifted its inspiration head again, and your pen obeyed.

[Sindu]

Yes! It took over me and played the game of it's liking.. Thank you Moon :)

[R Smith]

Good! without a doubt, a rant it may be but not sad, excellent rhyme and flow and your tidal wave of words makes for great reading, bravo :)

[Sindu]

Thanks a lot Richard! :D

[Saddam]

Good stuff always be praised and it is great job you have made.
Love this girl.

[Sindu]

Thank you Saddam for such kind stuff you say :)

[sinNsincerity]

Good or bad, say whatever you have to say!
I say this is awesome Sindu!

[Sindu]

Thank you Mr Sin. I do want to hear everything. Praises are warm, I wouldn't mind something less warm though it may sting :)

[AaronFreitas]

I enjoyed the rhyming in this piece... a dark time but a beautiful write came from. Awesome work!

[Sindu]

I was cracking at them going ' Rhyme you words, rhyme!!' :D Thank ya Aaron, I am happy something came out it.

[Jamestown]

Well penned!
I felt the dark energy behind these words,
very creative, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Sindu]

Thank you James :) I was just voicing my thoughts.. surprisingly they seem clearer when worded than just an emotion inside.

[Avinash]

Dark times. Striking imagery. You wrote it well.

[Sindu]

Thank you Avinash for a warm review :)

[T.S. Claus]

Wow, you have no reason to be apprehensive about posting anything. I love this especially the 2nd and 3rd parts. I understood a message and you kept my eyes and mind involved with the transitions from paragraph to paragraph (or whatever it is you call it in poetry!! Haha)

I'm looking forward to reading more from you!

[Sindu]

Thanks Claus :) I'm so happy this captured your attention and I have no idea what to call them either, haha. May be stanzas or paras but I'm not sure they are so in a strict sense... may be you can make your own term and popularize it :P