Bloody Marry's

There is no because.

DC-IC is a part of the English speech.

Marvel -VS- DC.

I am marveled that I can finally see that there’s no plausible clause for this dependent cause.

An incomplete thought…?

It was given to me as a gift like Santa Claus, more like God.

Bow your head and take a pause with a head nod.

I love and accept all of me because God loves and accepts all of my flaws.

I admire your freedom of speech because you’ve escaped the lock jaws of being perfectly flawed.

This has now allowed us to be able to speak.

I’m being me by using my speech from the very moment I accepted it was time to lose me.

There’s no controlling me because I unleashed my inner beast.

The one that murdered my inner me, my ego is no more, the rain poured and rusted the leash.

The world was created in a week, that is seven days and it will be reborn again after the seven seals have been broken for we.

Some play for keeps, but I play to be free without paying fees.

I once prayed for your blood to regenerate my heart, the repercussions of a dead love when you played me.

You’ve broken me out of my grave and now you have become my prey.

Now I have a thirst for more blood and an obsession for no sleep.

Searching for a feast because I lost my first love and I’m not so sure I’ll ever find my best love.

I’m thirsty again, absorbing your sins that leak through your skin.

R.E.D. Is the color of my tears when they bleed.

Destiny is my best friend and my enemy.

The reason why I don’t have a living, just the treason of time and space that has me at a killing for believing that you were the one I was needing.

I am my equal, unleashing the angel and demon.

Author's Note

GodVamp

Reviews

[Stone Fox]

I feel like you have described the perfect example of a vampire in this. Not the Twilight or VDairies version but the Anne Rice version.

My favorite line has to be,

"Some play for keeps, but I play to be free without paying fees."

truly majestic.

-Stone

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for the comparison. I felt like a dead vamp when I wrote this. Still do most days...
I would love to hear why that line stood out to you if you don't mind telling?
-David.

[Samaira]

I love what you have written. Your usage of words is so powerful here. This is great.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much for thinking so as well as reading Mannat, I highly appreciate it!

[butterfly desire]

Wow this is true poetry you are truly
gifted this is thought provoking
and Ilove that you talk about faith
Iam interested in what your interpretation of
the seven seals is again great writing

[sinNsincerity]

Why thank you, I highly appreciate that!
Well Revelations speak on how the seals will be broken leasing towards the end of life as we know it, but I focus on life after all that when Jesus will walk the Earth again as the true king. That's what I look forward to, and even though I'm not perfect, I try to live my life today with the promise that after my death- I will also live on earth again...

[butterfly desire]

And that is what we should all be doing not focusing
on not getting caught up in the pleasures of this world

[Ohhhwillow]

Is this read as a rap? I can certainly imagine this as a personal contemporary rap, anyway, it's flow goes in such a way that you cross many thoughts and areas with attention to contextual information, causing it to suit the style of 'spitting'; anyway, I love this, and you should too :)

[sinNsincerity]

Why thank you Willow! I never intended it to sound like a rap, or would I attempt to try hehe
I feel it should be read slowly and pondered on.
I am more than stoked that you enjoyed it, so thank you so much for reading as well as leaving me your thoughts. I highly appreciate it!

[nazia]

I can't but marvel at this wonder you created with words David. Your work is a beautiful musing with hidden meanings and thought provoking statements. Excellent write :)

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much Nazia, I always enjoy hearing from you!

[Divya]

Speechless. Beautiful poem but I didnt get meaning of Ist two lines. Remaining part is beautiful.

[sinNsincerity]

The DC is dependent clause and IC is independent clause and they deal with writing.
Thank you so much for reading and thinking my poem is beautiful Divya!

[Mila]

Good rhyme and I can tell that each phrase contains an even deeper meaning. Well done!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Mila. =D

[Coyote Poetry]

A wild ride in your poem.
"R.E.D. Is the color of my tears when they bleed.
Destiny is my best friend and my enemy.
The reason why I don’t have a living, just the treason of time and space that has me at a killing for believing that you were the one I was needing.
I am my equal, unleashing the angel and demon."
You create dangerous thoughts and the description brought to life visions of blood and demons. Destiny. Don't believe in it. One new turn. We can be different. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[sinNsincerity]

Oh yea, hell, when I wrote this I was having plenty of dangerous thoughts, hehe...
It was just one I had to write to get rid of those thoughts.
Thank you so much for reading as well as leaving your thoughts, I highly appreciate that.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[silent poet]

the wording of this is remarkable

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much Silent poet!

[silent poet]

You're very welcome 😊

[Writergirl]

I was thinking too, like some of the other commenters, about Eminem when I was reading this. He is very passionate and offers no apologies for the words he feels. Very nice!

[sinNsincerity]

I would agree with that. I am very passionate in what I say and very selective in choosing which words I use with no apologies to a certain extent... =D
I do appreciate your thoughts as well as spending the time to read. Thank you!