The Day Ends as it Began

The Day Ends as it Began

A Poem by sinNsincerity

The day ends as it began,

Stoned!

In the plateau of my heart,

Dusk falls and for you I call while howling at the full moon.

I still seek for you because without your mindful skills...

I will not survive.

My heart would tumble like an avalanche!

White like the snow,

At the bottom rest my soul.

A dilemma of dried blood I never wish upon.

If so, 

Serve me a dish of one last kiss.

Yet only the greatest memories of us,

Is all I'll ever reminisce.

Fantasies of reality!

My Matterhorn summit is too steep to keep snow on,

So I roll on…

I’ll remain to rise to be visible from space.

One slip can be game,

Death,

My den has been well chosen.

So agile I approach,

Getting a grip on these rugged slopes.

From a birds eye is where I get my view.

Then attacking,

Rushing down,

Then pursuing my hunt!

For what it’s worth,

I’ll never give up.

In desperation I look for success; although, sometimes it seems worthless.

Mythical,

I come from a remote world,

Only a few have journeyed.

Yours is much different and I have much to get use with.

I want to learn all of your secrets,

So show me your thoughts and love me with all of your heart.

Together our love is vast,

Spreading across the planet as the Himalayas.

Monsoons of refer smoke,

These clouds are so beautiful and don’t alter my judgment.

How’s the view at this altitude?

Cherry blossoms,

You bring warmth to my aching soul like spring.

It’s refreshing as a water filled spring that is rich with purity,

Which spreads throughout me.

The sweet tender love you have shown me is something that my heart has never seen.

Like an infant panda bear,

Though I was blind,

I wasn’t hopeless.

You are so unique,

But you’re only for me and extinct for others.

For more than eons my angel from above has watched over me and walked beside me.

Will I turn back,

Or risk death.

The risk would be worth it because for you,

I’ll always pursue.

You are the one that I want to complete my journey with

And it doesn’t matter to me if this one day comes to an end.

With the exhausting struggles,

We’ll get through them together.

By overcoming all,

We’ll be resigning in paradise.

At last it’s only you and I!



© 2015 sinNsincerity



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Wow this is so sweet! I love the imagery you used about the mountain and the wolf on the hunt. Those two images together work off of each other so well! I would suggest though, to leave it at that. Adding too much imagery makes the poem confusing to read sometimes. I would say to keep the poem to those images, because you explain those so well in this!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

3 Years Ago

Thank you Elisa for reading and your kind suggestions. I really appreciate it and more than glad you.. read more
Elisa

3 Years Ago

I definitely did. Please send me more requests to read your stuff!
sinNsincerity

3 Years Ago

I will indeed do so =D



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stumbled upon this piece 5 mins before i leave the office and I was completely taken by each word. It unfolds mysteriously and deeply. beautifully written. I read each line with the imagery in sight as i got lost in this tale.

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

9 Months Ago

I'm really glad that you liked it Bee.
"How’s the view at this altitude?
Cherry blossoms,
You bring warmth to my aching soul like spring."

...I adore this description! What an incredible journey you have painted!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

3 Years Ago

Why thank you Kelly! I really appreciate it.
It's a pleasure to hear from you.
Wow this is so sweet! I love the imagery you used about the mountain and the wolf on the hunt. Those two images together work off of each other so well! I would suggest though, to leave it at that. Adding too much imagery makes the poem confusing to read sometimes. I would say to keep the poem to those images, because you explain those so well in this!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

3 Years Ago

Thank you Elisa for reading and your kind suggestions. I really appreciate it and more than glad you.. read more
Elisa

3 Years Ago

I definitely did. Please send me more requests to read your stuff!
sinNsincerity

3 Years Ago

I will indeed do so =D
i feel liked i soared across skies and went on this journey with you! great metaphors and great write!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

3 Years Ago

Thank you Sereena! I'm glad that you've enjoyed the journey! =D
You really threw some great sentiment out in this piece, awesome raw emotion
and fantastic metaphor use, the mountain, avalanche, altitude and panda bear,
sweet sequence of well thought out and executed writing, BRAVO!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

3 Years Ago

Thank you James!

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