Bacon

Baby you know I love you

Whether you're fully clothed or naked…

And after wake ‘n baking,

I always kiss you on the side of your tummy

'Cause you know I love bacon!

You laugh and say,

“Babe, stop playing.”

Then you make pig oinks.

You make my heart level up,

More like super saiyan.

No senzu beans for regeneration,

No need to press refresh,

No salutation,

‘Cause my heart is always in constant rejuvenation.

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

i am very grateful for the belly laugh your poem has given me ...sometimes we get on serious successions of poetry here and need a breather ..
"Then you make pig oinks."
i love that ... the whole image of the kiss on the tummy and oink sounds is divine laughter from angels ... i am going find my Norma and see if i can elicit such primal grunting when i kiss her tummy ...:))) i'll let you know how that goes ;) loved the read!
E.

[Mr.Writer]

Yumm such a mouthwatering poem! :D
I really enjoyed reading this and I believe it was a metaphor to an actual person in such a creative way!! :)
Keep it up

[Robert Vicens]

I was a big fan of Dragon Ball Z growing up. I still have dreams about waking up one morning with a tail and running around rampaging as a giant Saiyan ape at midnight on a full moon.

[sinNsincerity]

Haha you're funny Robert!
That would be fun though.

[Briana O'Connor]

Lol! Love the way you incorporated bacon into a love piece. Now that I think about it...I shall set my standards on finding a man who makes me as happy as bacon :P Nicely penned.

[sinNsincerity]

You're too funny Briana!
Thank you for reading hon!

[Briana O'Connor]

What can I say? I try :P

[sinNsincerity]

Well done =D

[SleeplessVolcano]

aahhhh.....bacon! This may sound odd, but I live in a country where it is not legal to buy and sell bacon.......got caught once at the airport trying to smuggle it in....:)

Your poem made me smile! :)

[Briana O'Connor]

Are you serious? I would die without bacon!!!

[sinNsincerity]

Wow, which country do you live in? That would break my heart! I have a bacon soap bar that I love and smells so scrumptious!
I'm glad that it put a smile on your face. =D

[Dion [MFMDM]]

Creative man, dbz puns & all. Plus I love bacon! that's what like caught my attention firstly lol

[sinNsincerity]

Ha, that's awesome. You're the first person to notice the dbz references!
Thank you for reading Dion!

[Dion [MFMDM]]

No prob man

[Nadia Gerassimenko]

Heheheh that is cute and funny! Very playful and loving, just how love should be!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much Nadia!

[SleeplessVolcano]

Kuwait.....:).......minor inconviences matter little if one is surrounded by loved ones.....:)

[Jamestown]

The creative nature is fantastic! Loved the freedom of this
piece and humor:) Thanks for sharing your amazing poetry! PTL

[sinNsincerity]

hehe thank James! =D

[nazia]

A refreshing read away from the oodles of love proclamations about sweet simple gesture of your feelings. Beautiful :)

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much Nazia. I always love hearing what you think. I'm really glad you enjoyed it.