Oh How I Wonder

Oh how I wonder...

If she still keeps the memories of me and she

In between her sheets and comforter.

Or did she only focus on the load of blunders

To only place the vision of us in a blender?

Reviews

[Alice Poésy]

The thoughts that bother us the most - the ones we cannot get an answer of.

It's simplistic, but your choice of words are always so thoughtful. Like the word "comforter" denoting thoughts that will give her smiles and happiness, keeping her warm. Then there's "blunders" and "blender" which seem to clash with one another with their harsh sounds, echoing those exact thoughts in those two lines. For her was it just one big mess?

Very well penned.

[sinNsincerity]

One big mess..? I would hope not...

[Destiny Dreamer]

SO DEEP! I LOVE Ur thoughts ... U know well how to put Ur feelings into the words! Amazing! LOVE IT!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you and I'm pleased that you think so!
There's still more to come...

[Destiny Dreamer]

I'm EXCITED! :)

[Rei Ta]

A short poem that speaks so much! Well written!! I enjoyed this!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Loretta! I'm glad you enjoyed it! =D

[Elisa]

On of man's biggest fears is the fear of the unknown. Nicely done!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Elisa! have a great day!

[E G TEN]

Ah,, the one that got away are always the hardest to forget, women can't live with them can't live without them" sigh! Thanks for sharing!

[sinNsincerity]

All of them got away hahaha
Thanks for reading brother!

[Einahpets2012]

That's deep. The thought that go through every ones mind when a brake up happens or a separation, I like how you said "If she still keeps the memories of me and she, In between her sheets and comforter." You painted a picture in my mind that she not only has pictures or in some cases letters but emotional and physical memories of what you guys once had. I love it.

[sinNsincerity]

Awe Thank you so much! I tried transitioning from the great times to our worst times and which ones every women I've basically been with thinks about...
Thank again for reading and I love what you thought about this!
God Bless!

[Madhu]

Interesting and contrasting thoughts! So, I'll assume you've been missing her? (Just a thought)

[sinNsincerity]

Of course I miss her, I miss every women I had a relationship with.
From the girl who gave me my first kiss and all the others who came after...
They all have a special place in my heart and always will.

[Madhu]

I appreciate that :)

[Nadia Gerassimenko]

Hehehe...when hearts break and depart, it's hard to not "hate" the other person. Well hate is such a strong word, perhaps resent. I have felt it before. Many have. It's only easier to feel philosophical about the break up when you're the one at fault and you don't have any strong feelings in you (ironically or not). But there comes a time when hearts heal and thoughts of blending others in a blender ceases to exist and only good memories remain. Or at least the painful ones are not painful anymore.

[sinNsincerity]

Yes, it's all about not letting the pain hurt anymore.
Thank you for reading Nadia!

[andrew mitchell]

Yes!! these are questions we ponder on reflection and done brilliantly in short but depth to that question. Did you leave an impression that will last and last!

[sinNsincerity]

Very much so! thank you for reading Andrew.

[~]

good questions, that come from a heart that is hurt and does not want to be forgotten. it seems like you haven't forgotten her.. hope your heart will find rest soon. :)

[sinNsincerity]

I don't think I'll ever be able to fully forget any of the women I've fallen in love for,
but I don't want to because they have all taught me how to be a better man.
Thank you for reading Moonskittles. It's always a pleasure!

[~]

you are welcome :)