Heavens Reach

Heavens Reach

A Poem by sinNsincerity

Isa

We dated for five months…

In my mind of course;

Although,

She was engaged and soon to be…

I day dreamed that ! were he

When we would speak…

I will always keep her at heavens reach ~~~~>



© 2015 sinNsincerity



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Those are lines like the tides, low and high, long and short, happy and sad, unpredictable successive words, and yet overall so delightful to perceive, one is glad to surf. I'm in love with the picture you used here and the title too, also could quite relate to the last line. This was a lovely piece to read.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Years Ago

I'm glad you could relate and that picture is so amazing isn't it! =D
Thank you so much Rana!
Rana

2 Years Ago

Immensely amazing! =)



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So close... yet so far...
nice poem!!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Years Ago

A delightful treat I would never taste...
Thank you so much for reading Terry!
Those are lines like the tides, low and high, long and short, happy and sad, unpredictable successive words, and yet overall so delightful to perceive, one is glad to surf. I'm in love with the picture you used here and the title too, also could quite relate to the last line. This was a lovely piece to read.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Years Ago

I'm glad you could relate and that picture is so amazing isn't it! =D
Thank you so much Rana!
Rana

2 Years Ago

Immensely amazing! =)
I've been there before. ..thank you for sharing your work I love it

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Years Ago

All I can do for the time being is day dream... I'm glad you could relate. It's such an honor!
Sultrysoul

2 Years Ago

Well thank you its an honor to read your writing
Sin in Sincerity: Nice title and the love that was lost; where is she now...does he wonder? That would be so sad to fall in love, and know there is no possibility. Such sweet sentiment...Thank you so much. Dale

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Confuser

2 Years Ago

My pleasure....If I don't MAKE myself think everything happens for a reason, would be bitter; someon.. read more
sinNsincerity

2 Years Ago

I am most certainly a believer in knowing that everything happens for a reason. Everything is interr.. read more
Confuser

2 Years Ago

You're right, it's like the wind, & you're welcome!d
Well happens all the time with me, and I be like, why is everyone I want taken?!
But never the less, you wish for the good of them.
Well written, delicate and simple. I liked it.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much for reading.
Shivai

2 Years Ago

You're welcome!
I like the below lines.
"I will always keep her at heavens reach "
Heaven's reach can be tempting and lonely. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Years Ago

Thank you!
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

You are welcome.
Short and sweet!
Well done!
Keep up the great work!!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Years Ago

Short and sweet is only half of it...
Thank you for reading Emily.
loving somebody if only in your mind

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Years Ago

If you only kn3w, but I'll tell you... I fall in love with every single women I meet. It's so easy t.. read more
That's sweet. Unrequited but you really do love her and all you can do is to daydream.
Gentle words you delivered there :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Years Ago

It was a lustful love that turned into an unconditional one. I don't day dream about her anymore, bu.. read more

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sinNsincerity

East Los Angeles, CA



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