Heavens Reach

Isa

We dated for five months…

In my mind of course;

Although,

She was engaged and soon to be…

I day dreamed that ! were he

When we would speak…

I will always keep her at heavens reach ~~~~>

Reviews

[Rana]

Those are lines like the tides, low and high, long and short, happy and sad, unpredictable successive words, and yet overall so delightful to perceive, one is glad to surf. I'm in love with the picture you used here and the title too, also could quite relate to the last line. This was a lovely piece to read.

[sinNsincerity]

I'm glad you could relate and that picture is so amazing isn't it! =D
Thank you so much Rana!

[Rana]

Immensely amazing! =)

[....................]

love those opening and closing lines... the ones we love from a distance and go to our graves never forgetting how just breathing the air they breathe is enough...love this!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you! I love the ending line so much. It was temptation to the fullest because her fiance' lived out of state and she would flirt with me, but I didn't want to be that guy who would ruin a great thing over my selfish needs. I respected her too much and she really did; and still does, have a huge heart, but with that said, I fantasized about it...
I am one to gaze from afar one too many times, but always appreciating those close in hand.
Thank you so much for reading!

[....................]

A great and very relatable story, my friend... you are welcome!

[B]

Oh that is so sweet
I love it

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Nisreenaa!

[Einahpets2012]

Like James said short and right to the point, I like it even though it gets right to the point I still feel emotion in it! The heart brake with wanting her and falling for her, but not actually being able to have her. This is a poem a lot of people can relate too.

[sinNsincerity]

A lot of people can relate and the thoughts of wanting her were for selfish's reasons; although, she constantly flirted with me I knew that it would be wrong of me to ruin something beautiful in my eyes.
Thank you for reading and your great input!

[Jamestown]

Short, sweet and to the point!
I can relate to this piece, not the dating part
but knowing someone you admire is in the arms
of another, I always have to remind myself to pray
for them and not allow myself to be selfish:)
Great thought provoking piece and Thanks for sharing,
b-blessed!

[sinNsincerity]

Yea man, I had to decide whether to be a skumbag and take her for me, or respect her and her engagement from heavens reach.
Thank you for reading and leaving a note James!
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[sinNsincerity]

Took a midterm today for political science and I Aced it!

[Jamestown]

Praise Jesus, gr8 job my brother congratulations,
I wouldn't expect anything less from you:)

[sinNsincerity]

Are you still in Cali?