Give Me a Hour

Keep it right here…

Auto-tune your mood with the shades of the moon.

Are you sick and tired of me yet?

Has enough been said?

Nope!

Let’s keep this going...

Is it clear, or do you get bad reception where you are standing?

Do I make you want to get up and leave before the sun sets?

I can melt your heart to leave you wet…

Don’t trip hon, I know that I’m a trip.

Let’s take a trip.

Use a lot of spit.

Lube it up!

I’m sorry.

I meant to say loosen up.

I have a sharp sense of humor and I hope that it didn’t f**k this up...

We can have plenty of fun, but truly, I just want you to lay above me

Like the California sun while I tan under you hon.

Do I make you blush?

You do!

Hush!

I’m a w***e for your love and I lust for a brush or a touch…

Let’s walk along smoothly...Never slip...Get a grip…

Ms.?

Can I call you Ms.?

You’re so gorgeous and I could only wish that we were conjoined at the hip.

Rather that, I wish you were my missing rib!

I love your lips and the single thought of us having sex feels me up with more than bliss!

Please never press rewind.

Please give me permission to let the yarn unwind!

For quite some time, I’ve been eyeing your behind, but most importantly your mind!

They say you can’t explain the language of love because it’s blind…

I beg to differ because you gave me the blueprints to the design.

I’ll always have your heart shining up in the sky like the Big Dipper.

No flicker!

Stars and lights, starlight comes a long way before they die and so have I!

Allow me to get you undress…

Rather that, let’s reflect…

I love keeping it simple, but I more than love to keep you on your toes!

I may not be your first love, I may not be your last love,

But I can be your best love if you may…

What do you say babe?

Reviews

[Ishita Dixit]

I'm a w***e for your love
I can be your best love if you may!
^ Favourite lines.

This was sexy, playful, sexy, romantic, sexy, passionate! XD
Its time you change your pen name from Sin in Sincerity to S in Sexy!
You're going to be a passionate lover I can tell.
And I'am going to make sure my future lover takes his notes from you!
Great write my friend!

[sinNsincerity]

Hahaha you too funny Ishita, "S in Sexy." lol
Yes the passion is there, but it's compassion what I'm trying to perfect.
Just don't give your future lover a hard time =D
Thank you again Ms. Ivy!

[Ishita Dixit]

If he manages to strike a balance between his passion and compassion, then I'll try and be soft on him! =D
Also, you're welcome!

[Sindu]

That is sensual, sinful and sexy as... sexy stuff :P Lot's of S'
So passionate and abrupt, confident, playful, mischievous.. all the good stuff. I read a quote on how "a woman loves it when he touches her confidently, like he owns her", like she is important, she matters.
I can see a lot of women liking this and its pretty evident why.
The variations in your writes, it never is one thing or the other but all and then the craziness in nothing.

[sinNsincerity]

I's all of the S's, what you described after, and some hehe
I would never treat a women like I own her, but I will let her know and touch her like I worship her! Because she is important and matter very much so.
The craziness in nothing, I love that Sindu!

[Sindu]

I thought that line was tad possessive too which is why I included the latter views..

Craziness does that to me.. hehe

[sinNsincerity]

We're all crazy! We just need to find someone who will accept our craziness...

[Real Inspiration]

Very beautiful write. I love it! Honestly, I love all of it.
The way you write gives me chills, makes me thankful for the passionate love I have in my life.
Thanks for writing this!

[sinNsincerity]

That's a great thing to hear! Hold on to that love like it will never exist again.
I made that mistake and I'm paying for it now, but that's another story...
Thank you so much! You reaction is what drives me to write, so thank you again.

[Real Inspiration]

You're welcome. But, thank you!

[sereenaoutloud]

SexySin came out to play lol this is a fun, flirty, sensual well penned write!
Luuuuv it!! :)

[sinNsincerity]

Just a dash of it lol
Thank you Sereena!

[sereenaoutloud]

well it was a very nice dash that appeared!! Ive said it before but i love your style of writing and enjoy reading your writes!!

[sinNsincerity]

That means the world to me! You will always have a place in my heart.

[sereenaoutloud]

awww ditto Bestie :)

[B]

Very flirtatious work

Good job

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you!

[~]

And what an hour it will be. passionate and sensual my friend!! :D

[sinNsincerity]

Haha =D
Thank you for reading Moonskittles!

[Etta Beasley]

Very appealing and sexy.. I'm glad I came across your writing on here because it's so different from what I've been used to reading :) . I love that you chose to write about "love" or "lust" from this point of view.. the honesty is wild.

[sinNsincerity]

Well that makes me smile to hear that you think so! I use to write in general poetry styles I learned in my literature class, but one day I came across this poet named Charles Bukowsk. He lived in Los Angels after the Great Depression and after reading his work it inspired me to not write in the traditional poetry styles...

[Etta Beasley]

I'll have to look him up.. I'm getting my masters in English education so I can teach high school, it'll be nice to use him as a resource for some of my work 😊

[sinNsincerity]

I just put one of his poems on my blog section on here. check it out and let me know what you think...
That's awesome! I'm also majoring in English to teach =D

[Etta Beasley]

Awh that's great!

[JayceeC]

Wow Sin, there are so many great pick up lines here you make my head spin. This is just good sexy fun with a few explicits thrown in to keep it hot. "I've been eyeing your behind, but mostly your mind!" LMAO..loved that line you made me laugh after an afternoon of entering grades.. I'm glad you sent me this read request because i needed the laugh today. It's nice to know that Sin can cut loose with the rest of us...well, I'm not sure most cut loose like I do, but this was a fun start and very close. The male version of a calling card. Now don't go getting too hot on us, our friends will start to wonder if we post back to back..LOL. Enjoyed the little passion ration for today Sin! Thanks! Jan

[sinNsincerity]

For you to have a laugh makes it all worth it. That makes me smile.
You should have read the original piece I wrote, but I took some of the spice out because I felt that i would have overshadowed the entire poem.
More will come though...
Thank you for reading Jan and I'm sincerely happy being that you got a kick out of it. =D

[JayceeC]

well you know me Sin, I don't mind a little spice every now and then

[sinNsincerity]

Great to know =D
When you said you were grading papers
it made me laugh being that I'm going to be a teacher soon.
It just made me think a bit.

[JayceeC]

High school...its fun but have had a lot going so the extra time to get grades in was my bad..I've been procrastinating again! What age and subject?

[sinNsincerity]

I'm going to major in english.
I'm almost done with my associates and when I am I can begin teaching k-8th
I haven't really decided which grade I want to start off at...
Tell me about it. I'm an expert when it comes to procrastination! hehe =D

[TheOne&Only]

Loved it...very sexy in all aspects.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you hon ;)

[Jamestown]

Clever piece of work here, shows us the reader that Sin is a nut,
really fun read! Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you brother! I am sort of a nut, but who isn't right...