Much More

Much More

A Poem by sinNsincerity

In two weeks, I can

give you a guarantee

of two tulips because

for your heart…




Mine is too true

Love!




But three tulips would mean much

more.

And that is what

you are…



Much more



© 2015 sinNsincerity



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Beautifully romantic..I love the use of tulips. People don't pay much attention to the meaning of flowers these days. But for years what flower you sent was as important as the arrangement itself. Sorry years as a florist made it impossible not to comment..lol :-/

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Years Ago

I love flowers now. I never understood why my grandmother did when I was a child, but once she past .. read more
JayceeC

2 Years Ago

I've kept a lot of my mom's and planted her roses in my yard too. Its a great remembrance



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I like how short this is, it says everything that it needs to. It's simple and elegant :)

Posted 5 Months Ago


Gentle and beautiful use of words and thoughts. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry for love.
Coyote

Posted 6 Months Ago


Very romantic and thoughtful piece! Would make any girl swoon! Very special!
Tabby

Posted 6 Months Ago


Tulips are beautiful aromatic flowers. This was a sensitive, lovely read.
Thank you for sharing!

Posted 6 Months Ago


romantic. i love it! i like the flower reference :)

Posted 6 Months Ago


"In two weeks, I can
give you a guarantee
of two tulips because
for your heart…
Mine is too true
Love!" - I appreciate the romanticism here and the use of nature to characterize someone's innermost feelings. I will say that I don't agree with the use of exclamation points in serious pieces. It's my personal belief that your word choice should be the source of power - not the punctuation, but that is your personal preference.

"But three tulips would mean much
more.
And that is what
you are…
Much more" - I like the ending, you did really well as far as fluency goes. This piece has an interesting tone. Well done. Thank you for the read. Write on.

-Rynn


Posted 6 Months Ago


I like the modern feel to this love poem Sin.
I also like the sentiment - they are always worth more than we ever can show.
Bravo dear poet !!


Posted 6 Months Ago


Cute, romantic and simple. Good.

Posted 6 Months Ago


It's not easy to write this type of sentiment. you made it real and clever. very nice declaration of love and more!

Posted 6 Months Ago


Romantic and touching... we need more beautiful Tulips all around.

Posted 6 Months Ago



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