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Wonder Lust

Wonder Lust

A Poem by sinNsincerity

You left me breathless

when you asked,

“Do you like my

necklace?,” as

you escalated your

fingers down from

your left collar

bone towards your cleavage.

The center piece...

Heart exceeding because

a dose of you is

extremely needed!

Please my dear, I’m

in dire need

of O D-ing!



© 2015 sinNsincerity



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This piece giggles and staggers to its own satisfaction, yet the fight between punctuation and rhyme is a bit of a distraction. The direction of escalation and its imagery is strong in thought, but the lines surrounding the idea of center and heart could be clearer wrought. There are here in nestled lovely blossoms of poetic bliss, it could have great contentions to be more than a near kiss.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

1 Year Ago

Maybe it that is what it was meant to be? Nothing more than a near Kiss...



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Genuine and desirable write.
All things should not fix on girls.
Enjoy it.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Years Ago

I'm glad you enjoyed it!
sounds like the testosterone just kicked in ... ahh now bring those eyes back to eye level handsome ;) X

Posted 2 Years Ago


sinNsincerity

2 Years Ago

I'll try to hehe =D Thanks for reading hon.
Well penned!
Yep those girls can most definitely have the ding effect on us:)
Imagery is very clear in this piece, I enjoyed it a ton!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Years Ago

And I rather enjoy it hahaha
Thanks for reading man!
women are that way,i have no idea

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Years Ago

Hehe, Thank you for reading Sir!

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Added on June 14, 2015
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sinNsincerity

East Los Angeles, CA



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