Phantoms

I removed the

masquerade mask that

mimicked a mystical

kiss while everyone

around you and I

said that we shouldn’t.

Should we?

Let’s show them…

Let’s show us!

Reviews

[I Am Svetlana]

We are each our own phantoms & it's such a bold move for two lovers to decide to finally expose their relationship to the world, even if the world may not accept them. There was a dreamy kind of edge to this & it felt so raw. Great job, truly inspiring! I enjoyed the read.

[sinNsincerity]

hehe we really are. I could remember when I was much younger I would introduce a girlfriend to may parents and family due to the fact that I was raised to do so in a Mexican family. Fast forward, relationships have remained anonymous because sadly they don't last.

[Einahpets2012]

Short but bold. I love how in such little words your captured the moment and the feelings. Painted a picture in my head. Love it.!

[sinNsincerity]

I'm glad that you enjoyed it.

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice use of your statements. Made the reader feel the energy of the poem. I liked the directness and very nice ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Coyote!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[AE]

I have weak spot for wonderfully executed alliteration.

[annalysiar]

Great write. Wonderful depth on this

[Tiffany K Charles]

Keep going love.... You are getting there.... I can see your vision very well...

[sinNsincerity]

I'm still sifting through a fog with no light house in sight, but I did write something special tonight.
I look forward to hearing what you think...

[Ell.P]

Deep and daring! I'd love to read more of your work.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for thinking so Eli.

[😂]

Good writing ! !

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for thinking so,

[мalғy]

I think this is a very strong image in such a short delicate piece, definitely a wonderful write!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for thinking so.

[T. Edana Talbott]

Short but sweet, I'd love to see the show :)

[sinNsincerity]

hehe, are you sure about that..?